All Comments on 'Even in the Best Families Ch. 02'
by Phrenetic_Ice
- 11 Comments
Anonymousalmost 18 years agoA truly wonderful twist on the usual Dad takes daughter! Very erotic, I hope you can produce more of the same.
Horny_Mungo2almost 18 years agoyummy! I luv it! very erotic and sexy, and in an unusually well written form.
two thumbs up!
Anonymousalmost 18 years agoLoved it!! One of the most well written stories I've read on this site.and when Trace held her panties to the side for her husband, WOW.
Anonymousover 16 years agonot bad, but sometimes you can have too much of a good thing. I like the creativity in descriptions, but sometimes it goes a little far with the metaphors and whatnot and it's just better off saying it straight.
Anonymousover 16 years agoThis is a true mind fucking read ... superb erotic writing with humerous overtones ... tastefully accomplished !!!
What is it about incest that is so powerfully erotic on the mind? The fact that it is total fantasy and so totally taboo?
Anonymousover 15 years agoThis story has niveau, which is something not always present in other stories. It dispenses with four - letter - words and one can just simply watch as the actors remove anxiety and pressure of one another. It is also more modern, joking as it does about Courts, Social Analysis, Paedophilia and such things. Here´s to the Politically Incorrect!
Anonymousover 15 years agoSo perfect, such fantasy! I can't even describe how hot that was for me... It's so wrong, it's actually right... Haha.. Well, I have to say, once again, you have exceeded my expectations. Not that I should have any, but being human and all, I do.. SO yeeeei. Thank you a thousand times for your perfect dialogue and great inmagination.
I wish you could talk to me before bed everynight...
FaeLinaover 11 years agoIt's nice to see an erotic story written so well. Also, the little comments tossed in, such as the one about the Avon lady had me chuckling even as I got hotter and hotter. Well done, I must say
LilacQueen15about 4 years agoExcellent! A little fast on the deflowering. It didn't need to hurt that badly with a little patience.
ToughSailor3 months agoBeautifully written with a little lite tongue-in-cheek humor thrown in for peripheral amusement (AVON lady, etc.) . . . .
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