by sr71plt
Very well paced, the build up a teeny bit obvious but oh, the haunting end. I thought, since you've killed off your characters before, he was toast. Nice plot twist. Awesome sex.
Thanks, Nanobot. In the first run at this I did kill the protagonist, but after review, I thought, what the hell? one more twist of the tail and he can live. And, as you note, that becomes a fresh ending from me for those who follow my stories.