All Comments on 'Ever Rest at Evernew'

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nanobotnanobotover 8 years ago
suspenseful

Very well paced, the build up a teeny bit obvious but oh, the haunting end. I thought, since you've killed off your characters before, he was toast. Nice plot twist. Awesome sex.

sr71pltsr71pltover 8 years agoAuthor
Almost Did

Thanks, Nanobot. In the first run at this I did kill the protagonist, but after review, I thought, what the hell? one more twist of the tail and he can live. And, as you note, that becomes a fresh ending from me for those who follow my stories.

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Former SR71 pilot, currently professional writer and book editor; writes under name "habu" on other erotica sites. My erotica books can be found under the author name habu or Dirk Hessian (and coauthored books with Sabb under the names Shabbu or Stephen Kessel) at S...