All Comments on 'Evergreen Treats Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

New year, new story, yay! I was more than happy with how Gretel's story finished last chapter, but now you've piqued my curiosity where it's going next. (I wouldn't last long around fey) - Ted

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Always a good day when you upload :P

warelliswarellis5 months ago

Princess Ida sounds fun~. I hope she and her handmaids can together give Gretel an enjoyable night and more. 😍

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Hope Marise reappears and dominates Gretel with her fat milk-filled udders!

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Marise keeping Gretel as her little pet 🔥

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

This already lookin pretty good, though I wasn't expecting another chapter and thought this was over. I'm not complaining though. Happy new year and here's to hoping that we might see a new story with lilyana in it this year

Devastator325Devastator3254 months ago

Disappointingly short for a three month wait, and the quality of content isn’t significantly better than the first two chapters which were over double the length. This one honestly feels like half a chapter as well, all the build up, and none of the payoff, seems like it cuts off right when things are getting interesting.

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