by regularguy13
Loved every word till the end. A little anticlimactic. Otherwise, nicely done. Hopefully you continue this storyline?
It's okay to write in haste, but take the time to read it before sharing. Missing letters (e.g., he instead of her, exhaust instead of exhausted), missing punctuation (brunettes instead of brunette's). Surely you can do better.
Good imagination. Might work once with girl who had been drinking. lol
Clever story. What about the ladies finding out and subjecting him to SPH or femdom kink? Just spitballin here. Another chapter?
I give you a five for the title. Liked the story too..
So in chapter two, do the girls discover that he tricked them and used a dildo? Then, all hell breaks loose...