All Comments on 'Every Guy at the Party'

I wish this story were longer, but I rated it a 5, anyway.

Your story is both hot and surprisingly realistic.

A short story about a nympho who decided to pull a train and all the boys liked swapping STDs. Whoops just did your story in one sentence.

Not sexy, not erotic, not entertaining, pure rubbish.

From anyone else it would be what is expected here - from you it's a disposable misfire.<P>

Don't sully the prior great work - please.<P>

Anybody could write this drivel. So it's a mulligan of sorts - hopefully.

I liked your story because I was in one of those trains once in Detroit and you told it just like it is .

Good story. It's nice to see some cum slut appreciation out there.

This is silly- No stupid is a better word. Nothing sexy about demeaning yourself. Nothing sexy about using a woman in a brainless release of sperm.

I love reading about sluts, she should of meet her further husband that night.

...story by the writer... or maybe not?

In many respects it doesn’t paint a very erotic picture and I suspect that this was the author’s intention....

It was weird. I liked this story and hated it at the same time. Yes, fantasy, but yet sort of disgusting. I have never been a guy involved with a train. It has some appeal to me, but also being naked in front of a bunch of other guys causes me to feel a vulnerability that I would not like. A couples swap of even several couples would float my boat, but a messed up whore being soaked in cum makes me want to puke thinking about it. Sorry.