All Comments on 'Every Man's Fantasy Ch. 14'

Finally. It is good to have Ezra back.

Great read and thank you for your continuing effort.

I agree it is fantastic to have Ezra back as well!! Great writing and story telling, cant wait for more.

Thank you

Great work, love where your story is going. Know it's lots of work to write amongst all the other things that happen in life but keep at it, it's going to be a lovely book in the end.

Very nicely handled with the cloners, getting Ezra (and us) all riled up and then have practicality overrule the feared conflict.

Once again some very Hot scenes, you continue to be original!

Some great relationship building - and conflicts/resolutions.

On to Yumi: who is she fleeing from? It's a bit of a given that she'll have a boy... Will someone (his sister? ) detect the signal of the escape pod?

Love the story, thanks for sharing!

Jason

MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!

Hope you're doin alright. I loved this chapter and look forward to the next.

Thanks everyone for your comments. Next chapter probably a week or two. Been busy with stuff.

Fouroses: you're welcome. I'm glad you enjoy it.

Jason. You read my mind and know where this story is heading.

Kaleb. I'm very well, thanks, but insanely busy. Thanks for asking.

Best regards,

Erinaceous.

I envision Ezra leaning forward, pointing with an oustretched hand at poor newly recovered Yumi: Samothea Needs You!

He's got the beard and everything!

:D

So many good things in this chapter, from a variety of relationships to the big unveiling of the grand anti-climax.

Having a blast, onward!

J

Beautiful evolving story!

love everything about it!