All Comments on 'Every Time I Close My Eyes'

Another mind-blowing story mate. Awesome!

This story is really fascinating. I honestly think this sci-fi premise could work totally independent of the sex angle, in fact. I hope you do more with it. I will probably steal some variation of it for my own work. :)

great writing, such a 'far away' style, and very entertaining and erotic.

This is a very good story, but this seems like just the start. It needs more