All Comments on 'Everybody Comes to Hollywood Ch. 01'

enough of a story to make me care about the characters! Not too many of these stories do that. Thanks

moving through all your stories now that ive finished with a different family and the billionaire series ..... i could even tell your stories are yours without even knowing them to be by you.....incredible as always .... i see you're still an active member, so keep them coming :)

You went from vaguely touchy feely yet hot to full emotional turmoil yet scalding in one scene!

Nicely done!

JRT