All Comments on 'Everybody Comes to Hollywood Ch. 04'

The entire series is phenomenal! I'm at a loss for words..

I hate you. Why? Because you are simply too damn good. Its sort of like standing at the bar in the Playboy mansion except I am sort of like Rob Scheider and you are like Brad Pitt. Damn you for being so damn good at this. In other words I love your work and this series and pretty much everything you have put out on this site so faryou talented sonovabitch lol.

I'm blown away by this series! Your characters have such depth and feel real, you can feel how he feels at all times and the plot is excellent! I loved the way it all ties into itself. My advice just keep writing series like this and you could be a Hollywood screen-writer!

This series has been amazing, reading it makes you bond with the characters and genuinely care about what happens next. Without doubt the most erotic yet moving set of stories I have ever read. You are extremely talented!

oustanding work. i dont bother searching for other stories now

...for a writer to shoot a pain-in-the-ass producer in Hollywood? One excuse could be that the producer deserved it.

....GIRL-GASM!

I had read a few of your stories before but decided to start at the beginning of this series and read them all in order. Simply awesome. Your characters jump from the page and the sex is so hot. I'm just hoping one day to be able to join you as one of the Literotica greats. You are already there, I have a lot of work ahead of me. - Chip

You are still at it, being great. This Hollywood series is the same as your other stories. All great.

I have read all of your stories and I am truely impressed. All of your chatracters are so lifelike and beliveable even in the extrodinary situations you place them in. The sex is so hot and doesn't fall into the dreaded zone of being too repetetive, and I love the way you think bro. Its easily accessible to both sexes, guys obviously daydream about this shit constantly and there's enough sensuality and emotion in there to draw in the women too. Your a fantastic writer and I hop to see more coming from you soon, I've been working on somthin myself and when I finish it id love to have you take a look and give me your take. Keep up the good work buddy!

I've read all your stories. Keep writing!

A very good author as I turned the pages to follow the story more than to enjoy the eroticism which too was excellent.

Loved the characters, the romance, the self evaluations, and could relate to the character from actual similar experiences - being torn between loving two ladies simultaneously and having to make that choice... of course Bethany made it easier than what I found in real life. I truly loved this story and you did your homework on how Hollywood works... On a scale of 1 to 10 this story is at least a 20 .... I LOVED IT!!!!

That assured his and Andrea's Self fulfilling self destruction: when she came back early from London, knowing he had to leave, he destroyed her.

She would (likely) have committed to him had he kept it in his pants.

More to the point, it's only a matter of time before Andrea's heart leads her to a real destitution. That in the back of my mind took the joy out of the story for the majority of the last two chapters.

Then again, maybe George will be good to (and for) her, I'll leave her with that hope in mind.

The end was equal parts predictable and enjoyable. At least I have less trouble seeing how for their future.

Thanks for a great glimpse of what "making it big" could be like for a real person ;)

JRT

please help andrea... That was depressing as sshit... Just one more chapter.

Enjoyed it immensely. Im glad you had the

main character find his soul

I enjoy many of your writings, but I was a bit disappointed when Bethany invited the twins over. Making it look like they haven’t learned their lesson, it’s better for the relationship to keep the sex monogamous. And to stay off the casting couch.

On the twins thing at the end - this was shaping up to be a true romance where the MC and Bethany grow up and live HEA. But you gotta know your author. BlueDragon is a group sex guy and he does what he does. Still, an entertaining read.