by sunburycd
Good premise.
But sex moves ahead much too fast. And lacks details.
Three stars.
Rosa is lucky. Her lover is right next door and close by for a fucking whenever they can get together.
Your stories are always brilliant, believable characters, funny with the right blend of eroticism and sex. Can't see any links to any other stories/characters which is another thing I enjoy about your writing (I know not all of your stories do).
Every young mans dream, and so glad his came true. Great short story that left an ending that our imaginations could finish. Had to chuckle when Mason shot his load on the second stroke, but that's what youth and sexual overload can do. Thanks for writing and posting.
HOT story...really like Rosalind,and lucky lucky Mason..! He'll never forget her..
tho thought a real pity she shaved her muffin just because of one grey hair...sure Mason's wouldn't care a whit
Very well written. Thank you! I hope Rosalind can think of some exciting domination games to play with the lucky Mason.
Wow! I remember back when I was 18. This story brings back some wonderful and powerful memories. Thanx
Excellent read, fun read with enough believable depth to make it erotic like it was retelling of reality.
Very good to read. I would love for my wife to read this story. I think it would get her hot.