All Comments on 'Everything's Fine'

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scargazerscargazer6 months ago

I love the entirety of the story and your writing style. I only wish your ending wasn't so ambivalent

BeefyhungtopguyBeefyhungtopguy6 months ago

Wow. Is there more? This is an intense story... feels like so much is still left open...

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

I wouldn't say it's a good erotic story, but it's a damn good story.

The emotional chargedness of it all, the sparks of tenderness between Kurt and Caleb, the general ambivalence and tension lingering between all the characters. It's beautiful and I wish there's more to them, I wish they could find happiness, I wish I could see them fixing the life they have right now.

But that wouldn't be the point of the story, I reckon.

Thank you. Your work has always been one of my favorites in Literotica and seeing you post more here brightens my heart.

StraycatndcStraycatndc6 months ago

Fantastic story! Hoping for a part 2.

YandisaNgxabaneYandisaNgxabane6 months ago

Loved it, as usual. Your characters are always so rich. You reveal so much about them and yet the mysteries and yearning for more still remain 💙

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