All Comments on 'Everything's Going to Be OK Ch. 01'

I liked the part where she is in the army and got to travel to places that most people only dream of going,(except Texas of course), lets see what is in store for her in part 2

If you intend to keep on writing then this is a very promising start.

As an English person some of your Americanisms are a little confusing but apart from that I only mentally clocked up some five words that required editing, not bad.

So let's hope that Chapter 2 turns out as well. However autobiography can only be taken so far! After that imagination must take over, even if real events are added as background ; like your Army experiences.

I really enjoyed reading this. I hope everything will be okay for them. If it's true love then it will. Can't wait for the next installment.

You had a nice approach. A few mistakes here and there but overall I had a good time reading this. If you want I'd love to be your editor for this story and give you some ideas as to how this story will play out. I enjoyed it a lot and thank you for sharing this with us.

Whens next instalment..... still waiting.

Story was good. Just need it 2b finishd off

But, hell, a bit of dictionary work would sure make this an easier read!

As a Veteran myself, I can only hope and pray that you both are still together, and your Love has not waned during your times apart. I know that being separated from someone you Love while serving your country is the most strenuous time for both your Hearts, as I have done so for many years while serving. Stay true to each other and let your Love blossom.