by MsAlexisofLDW
I'm glad you enjoyed it so far, but it would be helpful if you provided some follow-up questions so I know which loose ends you are referring to : ) I'll very much keep them in mind for the next time!
This is written well--it's served up to make you think, with twists in the plot. Evelyn is truly a loving wife. But it seems like we jumped into the story half way in, with side plots here and there.
'Tis true, it's definitely a fast-paced adventure. My goal was really to give it a 'snapshot' moment-in-time feel. When I wrote it, I was actually concerned about it being overly lengthy, but now I definitely know that I have more breathing room.
Hopefully that's weird in a cosmic righteous sense kind of way. ; )
This story definitely did not follow the trajectory of most Lit stories. And to me, that makes both the story and the author quite fascinating. It's a pleasant thing to have to think a bit when reading. If makes me wonder just what she might come up with next.
A few years a go I was traveling for business. sitting at the bar in the airport Hilton in Wichita Ks.
not much to do in Wichita. the place was pretty much empty, anyways I'm nursing a Beer and the female bartender and I start up a conversation my guess is she was in her mid Forty's Where taking about everything and nothing. She asked if I was married I said no divorced. her response was me too.
The reason I'm divorced is my X liked my clothes better than I did. What the hell to you say to that ! My first thought was TMI.
My point is, I think that is how most woman would react.
I don't mind weird as long as it's that M. Night Shyamalan weird. Y'know, from the time before his career tanked? Please readers, don't hesitate to send me a direct message regarding your interpretation of the story! I can only get better with clear feedback and trust me, I won't bite ya! Otherwise I will have to change my username to "BadOnPurpose" lol
I suppose you could place it in the fetish category, but since the focus of the story is on romance and a loving wife versus the panties in question (or is it the light BDSM touches?) I think it is in the right spot.
I loved the story! It kept me glued to it wondering what the next turn of events would be. There did seem to be a few jumps in the plot and side-plots, which left things up to our imagination, but I think you explained them in the other comments as you wished it to not be overly long. The touch of fetish added some spice too. Honestly, I got caught up in the feelings of anxiety, fear, arousal, and even the empty moments of longing for the passion. And the hot tub scene...omg...ive been there! Very well-written and kept me guessing and pulled in...all along. A sequel would be much anticipated!
Thank you for your comment. You have definitely given me some food for thought as I set upon the work for my next journey. Overall I am just proud of the fact that I turned threesome sex into a purely romantic endeavor; something that many said could not be done. Here's to progress!