All Comments on 'Evil Bitch Ch. 03'

If he keeps hitting on every slut in town he's

going to have several STD's by the end of the month.

When one or more of the women in his life fall

head over heals for him.

Or it goes the other way.

He falls hard and doesn't want to share...

The jealousy starts and the fun ends.

you write a really hot story loved them all !you get a place on my favorite list ! thanks

I'm loving it.

I want more.

I do think he should settle down on the number of girls though. But the sex is steaming hot.

as a fan of incest stories i have to be a hater when the females are turned into sluts for the males fun. interesting turn with iron rain cross over too.

Really, Mr. Lurker? It's fantasy. There are no STDs in Fantasyland.

Cool story but are you running out of names? Kat and Nick Shaw? LOL. Don't listen to those that think it's only male-oriented fun. I mean they get orgasms too and Jon is buying them something. That sounds like the real world.

Can't wait to read more of your stuff. You are quite prolific...

Dave

Jon better stay away from Nick Shaw and his sister Kat, because he isn't capable of staying up with the Shaw when it comes to fucking...

A great chapter, and the story is becoming a little spooky hearing about the old Miller place. Perhaps there's some kind of super-natural powers in the old house that Jon will learn how to use for his benefit.

The story just keeps getting better.

Thanks for the great read.

Is a chapter 4 coming soon ?

Just for bringing Nick Shaw, Kat, and their deux-ex-machina sci-fi into it. Iron Rain was a great simple boy-fucks-sister-and-stepmom before you turned it into cyberpunk-meets-Lovecraft. Don't be afraid to be different this time around.

Excellent so far! Absolutely loving the story!! ...a few slips here and there but overall excellent :). Onward chapter four!

What is it with authors on this site and gangbangs?? It's like they think everybody wants to see the chicks their fucking fuck other dudes, especially when it's incest. Only a minority of people like gang bangs, it's a fucking fetish, not even a mainstream one. I know more dudes who would be grossed out by sloppy seconds, myself included, then I do who want to participate or see a girl they are fucking get gang banged.

Definitely ruined this one when you shared the sisters.

You never share in incest stories with outside men. It completely ruins it.

Was a good read until the sharing.

SHARING IS A CUCK THING (99999999999999999)

Don't know why authors like to mix incest and gangbang, It's make stories shit.

So far this is sex fair story.

This storyline was a great ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ until you ruined it and it’s only fucking chaipter 3. Gangbang sisters and mother. Then from incest to sci-fi by adding Nick Shaw fuck me what next. Fortunately for me I won’t be wasting my time finding out. ⭐️⭐️