All Comments on 'Evil Bitch Ch. 09'

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billyjim55billyjim55almost 12 years ago

Oh lord I cant say anything except what I always say here, I love how your mind works and weaves the story. ty for an always great read./ bill

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichalmost 12 years ago
I'm glad his mom is with him now, she needs a lot of fucking to keep her happy.

Could it be that Mary is related to Jon, part of the Miller family?

I wonder if his mother has powers she doesn't know she has, since she hasn't ever tried to use them?

Perhaps Jon's new ring will give him a never ending supply of sperm if he would want that, and give him super human powers of where he wouldn't need to recuperate after having sex, and have a hard on as long as he wanted one.

He will surely have to have some kind of super powers when the twins and Veronica return to him. He will have a least six women to keep satisfied sexually.

Thanks for the read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

One of the best story ever. Please continue

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Amazing.

This has to be one of the most interesting and well thought out erotic story out there. Well done!

PokingdemonPokingdemonover 4 years ago
Letter

What happened to the hand written letter from Ch. 08? It fell on the floor and it's been forgotten? Not really worried about it as a plot hole. Just wondering.

Foxterot7aFoxterot7a11 months ago

I will have to start reading more scifi. So far, average 4.5 stars.

Aussie1951Aussie19518 months ago
I think you lost the plot buddy

You’ve got so many characters floating around in your head in this story you’ve lost the plot I think. Who in their right mind would put Melody on the board of directors fucking REALLY. By her own admission, she knows nothing about the company or the product. She speaks a shitload of languages, a qualified commercial pilot, and she’s gonna do a job that she’s not qualified to do. Come on now.What a waste of talent wouldn’t you say..Out of all your characters she was perfect for him as a personal assistant or whatever.. I know this story is a fiction but please put a some reality into it. Also what about the letter on the silver tray. When are you gonna get around to telling us what was in it? ⭐️⭐️⭐️

Aussie1951Aussie19518 months ago
In addition to

I forgot to mention martial arts who better to protect him when the time arises..

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