All Comments on 'Evil Bitch Ch. 10'

amazing as always

Stranger and stranger. :s What's next?

is with your titles. They fit for a few chapters and then the wild tangent recreates your worlds and I feel they need to be renamed. Iron Rain stopped having anything to do with that gang, Evil Bitch stopped being evil within a few chapters. How about IR and EB from now on? That is just a suggestion but I think it could work.

and then across the part where charlie chose Tesla as his avatar... and I about had a total nerdgasm...

Tesla has been my idol since I was a child, I have tried to read every book on him I could find (that wasn't written in complete opposition about him and based soley on lies and slander), to see him come into play even as one of the AI's avatars has made my SHITTY day (dealing with AT&T, the WORST company I have EVER dealt with), right as rain... I was going to get piss drunk this evening to calm down, but now im going to drink to celebrate!

GOOD FUCKING GAME (I will always be a gamer, no matter how old I get)

getting a headache with all of the plot twist turns and plain old WTF's

Love this chapter! New characters, new adventures but still the same! Keep'em comin as I love it.

Tell me you didnt just stop right there lol. My God man your killing me waiting on pins and needles to read the next chapter. Like I've said before, I like the way your mind works and comes up with this stuff. great job.ty/ bill

It reads as if old Charlie may not be entirely human.

Any chance that Mary will become closer to Jon?

One of the six women that Jon has been having bountiful sex with, must certainly be pregnant by now,

It will be good when his twin sisters and Veronica get back to him, It will be interesting to see how his sisters react towards him, now that he is Duke Jon.

I like he way this story keeps me wondering what is going to happen next.

Thanks for the great read.

Your chapters keep getting weirder and weirder. The sex parts are good, but trifling through the "what the fuck is this shit?" moments of sci-fi gets harder to deal with in each new chapter.

Plot isn't bad, but you should reign it back in some. You let out too much slack on the creativity chain.

"pins and needles"??? I am on my tiptoes for the next chapter!! I love the direction you are going....not that I can anticipate all of the turns. And I love the "sci-fi" stuff!!! Keep 'em coming....oh and the fucking is good too!!!!

Have sat here and read all 10 chapters in one sitting, Extremely good story sir and look forward to the rest of this tale.

I sincerely hope you are going to continue this very entertaining

Story. It would be a true shame to build such an interesting

World and not take US out the other side of the rabbit hole???

Awesome story!

I doubt anyone is pregnant unless our hero or his naughty avatar "sterling" wish it, since his body is teeming with nanities and it's highly probable his harem is well. Due to the presence of nanites, it makes no sense that anyone would need surgical enhancements. If our "hero" with assistance of his avatar can cure brain tumors and change retina lens at will... surely they can enhance boobies! :)

Anyway I love this series and can't wait for the next chapter!

I hope you plan 10 more chapters!! I love your writing style. The story is great! Just the kind I love.

Bruce

This is a very intriguing story erotica with a sci-fi element...

Excellent erotic scifi.