All Comments on 'Exchanging Butts Ch. 02'
by hotpup
- 11 Comments
sirhugsabout 14 years agomy only complaint is that the final sex scene was so short.
I want to read more, including Betty joining in.
Hendrixieaabout 14 years agoThere need to be more chapters. In chapter 1 there was only one question that you did not have the Dad ask the daughter about birth control and he did not ask the friend in chapter 2 either.
hornacekabout 14 years agoIt was still pretty good, but the best part about Chapter 1 was that he was in control. He lost this control almost immediately in this chapter when the daughter confronted him about the hypnosis. Then it stopped being a hypnosis-incest story and became a straightforward-incest story. Not that I don't like both kinds, but Chapter 1 was more enjoyable.
It would have been better if, as soon as the daughter confronted him about it, he said the control word, put her under, and told her to forget all about thinking that he had hypnotized her into having sex with him, and that that thought of that would be inconceivable to her.
Still, I have high hopes on their interaction with the wife.
Anonymousover 13 years agoVery nice you lost your control when your daughter confronted you, shame. Get the control back the sluts and I want it. Write more
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