All Comments on 'Exotic Seduction'

Stupid, really stupid. Why bother? You suck as a writer.

He is a fucked up little fag with way too much time on his hands.

I am sorry, but I did not enjoy this story very much. It had a "Reader's Digest" feel to it, and after I read it I felt very sad in that I wasted a minute and a half of my life in doing so. My wasting another minute to tell you this makes no sense either, but I felt like I had to say something after giving this a try.

I found the premise far-fetched, and the lack of emotion that permeated the brief opus was very sad indeed. It was almost as if you didn't get off writing this any more than I did in reading it. It wasn't horrible; the minor grammar and sentence structure errors were not overwhelming and the content wasn't offensive.

It's just that it was so... blah.

loved the humanity of it all. thanks for the enjoyment

THIS WAS SO GOOD OMG