by JaneBirch
The first 2 chapters literally call for more of Jane's experiences at the hands of Marion! Very well written and so erotically descriptive - keep on going with this lovely F/f tale!!!
the frist two chapters really set up the story.
While im not particulary interested in the water sports part the mod and dom part feels very good. Please continue the journey.
This series definitely is getting more "darker" as you stated....I love reading it and can't wait to see how far it will go....btw,that whole ginger scenerio really got me worked up...So kinky! thank you
Oh I really love this story so far, again I'm eager to read more :)
I like the fact that period is mentioned, not that I particulary wants it but it's usually a taboo subject, and I think it's an interesting detail and it adds realism :)
In fact the whole story sounds realistic with nice details here and there, I really love it :)