All Comments on 'Extending the MILF List Ch. 19'

No one got to eat dinner or breakfast, Sonny might get dry orgasms if you keep that up. Any way other than that good writing, had me reading until I finished it. Cannot wait until the next chapter. Unless if it is the next chapter of your other series "A Fucking Investment".

Might get somewhere by then.

I must admit I was slightly disappointed with the beginning of this latest installment. The tone just seemed a bit off but once you got to where Holly came in everything started to coalesce. Still draws me in and wanting more!

Like someone else said, the start was a little slow. But I really enjoyed starting on page 9 or so. I laughed a few times with the airport and the car scenes. Those last 3 pages were very enjoyable.

Your story is great just need to move on please I hope a lot more chapters

Please keep things rolling. lots of strands you have to keep track of - thanks for a touch of Debra D, thought you had forgotten her.

So far this is easily 1 of my favorite stories. Can't wait for Ch. 20. Keep up the good work.

Can't wait for the next series of chapters. I wonder what would happen is Sid and or Sid came back for a visit?

I think it would be great for D. Debra to start acting like a girlfriend and spending more time using her, since she was dropped awhile ago to introduce more characters that's hard to keep track of.

Would be neat to see Sonny fucks the Senator, Mayors or Governor's wife, sister, daughter, Mother. Break in a lesbian, a nun, cop etc etc.....the professions are endless.

One thing though, do cars not have heaters where they live, it seems every time sonny is driving they are always freezing.

About 9 weeks ago I wrote a brief comment on Chapter 18 thinking I was in for a 3/4 day trip to China. 9 weeks later I'm back, my sanity saved on more than one occasion after some very prolonged negotiations by reading through these chapters.

C is often criticized for having chapters that are too long, stories which don't reach a conclusion, not getting rid of used up characters, and spending too much time on the plotting and lead up. And so on. It's true that he would have a larger reader group if his stories were shorter, if he reached neat conclusions - if if if if.

I have concluded that C is doing a great job being C. He may piss you off from time to time, he occasionally does it to me but he has a way of not only getting Sonny into impossible situations but finding impossible ways out. C is at his best writing 'combative dialogue,' he has a minor genius for simile and metaphor and his 'hero' Sonny is both believable and unbelievable in turn. I particularly enjoy Sonny's interactions with his friends, Chris and Sammy of notable importance in the last two chapters, and I include his sisters in this group. It grounds his character because it separates him largely from the utterly fantasy relationships with the various other women. The characters of Sid, Borland, and Hassum all of whom Sonny is slightly scared of, add weight to Sonny as a real person. DD is my favorite female because she is a bit of a self centred bitch tho' they now understand each other better. Ahmay and Annie's niece still haven't come into play and I have a distinct impression there is more story to Annie than just the extra milf. Dunno when the interviews will start but look forward to them, I also hope Carol Lynn doesn't turn out to be too easy a pushover. Look forward to the next chapters.

PS During a rather tedious long meeting in Shanghai I was reading one of these stories on my lap top. My Japanese co-negotiator spotted that it wasn't the latest stock market reports and asked me what it was. I responded by sending him the first three chapters of "Making the Milf list." His English is ok but not brilliant, but even I was surprised when a few hours later I observed his rather conservative young female simultaneous translator sitting in the bar reading Chapter 3 in Japanese to her boss!

Some of the banter you come up with while handing out and juggling pussy is great.

Keep up the good work and we'll all keep wondering how this is going to end!