All Comments on 'Eye Contact'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Superb

It was a terrific story. I hope you turn this into a series.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!

This is a very good start for a very hot series. You could do so many things with this plotline. The Doctor, his Receptionist Anne and any number of his customers/patients, the possibilities are endless.

Thanks,

Joel

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Very exciting

Absolutely a great start to what should be a terrific series. You have endless possibilities here - and a very, very erotic story. Much wood!

AveryTomDeaconHarryAveryTomDeaconHarryover 17 years ago
General comment

Spelling - abysmal.

Punctuation - worse.

BUT

GREAT story, though it needs quite a bit of rewriting to explore the story to its full potential.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
wicked hot!

Loved it! it was absouloutley erotic, and pleasing. Where can i sign up for contacts like that?

intemposexintemposexover 12 years ago
very good

Do a follow up about the other patients

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