All Comments on 'Eye in the Sky Bk 02: Artifact Ch. 03'

It's picking up and starting to become very interesting but still short after the 19 pages I think of the first part of Eye In The Sky. Once again the author is delivering her trademark quality and I cannot wait for more to come.

"Too short"? I hate those words. Another great installment in this story. Thanks so much for the hard work for us readers!

of us wanting to glut ourselves on the story. It's only too short in relation to our impatience to get the whole experience. Other than our selfishness it's the perfect small dose of good writing. Now, having shown how selfish I am, I look forward to the rest of the story. Thanks for sharing with us and keep up the good work.

pappy

The game is afoot! I love the suspense and the nude beach!

Really enjoying the story so far. So many options! Looking forward to reading the rest.

A pure fairy tale story.

Why doesn't he tell us how to unwrap a pack of cigarettes. Can't stand the over description and waste of words. Sorry, I'm going somewhere else. This guy likes to hear himself write.

Suspense is building. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️