All Comments on 'Ezmerelda Wins the Bet'

Great story. Can't wait to read what happens next!!

Well done.

This was a well thought out story. I like the way you slowly escalated the sexual tension without going over the character's boundaries. Looking forward to the second story when or if you write it.

As always you come up with fun and crazy situations. That's why I like ya ;)

A fun story! Something I would like to do. I enjoyed the two women especially. There are a lot moe scenarios that could be played out however this was nice

Very nicely done...good pace...honest characters...a little over the top but believable! I'm sure there are readers who will encourage a part two but I think it's best left to our imaginations. You decide.

Very well written. Not a quickie, but one with continued tension building up and staying.

The story was well written and fun. Poor Dan was jerked around by his Chemistry teachers oversight. Now, will Esmeralda bring Giant or will Dan invite his friends when Esmeralda performs her slave for a day. Since there already is a very definite sexual tension the answer seems obvious but the author can sequel this story with any type of interaction of characters that he desires. A sequel would be nice. I've been out of school for a long time but this story was a great reset to my fond memories of playful fun in that era of my life which was very welcoming to say the least. I have nothing but good feelings from this read and I am glad a found this little masterpiece. Thanks author well done!!!

next Saturday would be nice

So? When do we get part two? This could be goooood!

Great plot twist!