All Comments on 'F2: Sydney Surprise'

Lack of proper editing made it difficult to read in places.

I struggled to follow the story.

Story needed serious editing and this came in the way of enjoying it. In terms of the mystery basket contents, location and sport were done well but intellectual and especially sarcasm left a lot to be desired.

Loved it. I was much too caught up in your romantic lovely story to care a F about the fact that you called both central characters different names in it and frequently made typos. Can't identify myself to you yet but will PM you after the names are all announced.

This story was written by xelliebabex.

I love your stories but this needs some serious rewriting 4 🌟 I'm afraid.