All Comments on 'F4: Edge of Tomorrow'

I really liked the raw, gritty feel of this story. The characters felt very real, the structure of the story and tone of the language, though not erotic (to me), beautifully matched the mood.

Nice job capturing the darker side of things.

...and then there is DARK! You turned off all the lights and then shot the moon out of the sky. Wow!

Very intriguing tale well told.

Wow, this was a little intense, Good job with your interpretation of the song. Good luck!

Pulled me in, felt her pain and ended feeling sad. I agree with the raw and gritty comment. Probably more real then alot of us are comfortable with. Very well done

That was sad, and felt so authentic. Nice interpretation of the song. Though it was not erotic to me, it was quite beautifully written.

I don't normally go in for gender-ambiguous story, but, so far, this is the second such tale on this list that is exceptional. Wonderfully dark and honest. Not overly-erotic, but it didn't need to be, at least for me. Highly worthwhile.

I felt like the desperation was my own. I liked the way it mirrored the song and then finished the dark tale. I loved the ending.

I don't know the song,but this story was uncompromising, Well done

The trans world, why people get into this edgy existence, how they survive - or don't, is expertly depicted here. I wasn't sure about the ending, it seemed rushed - maybe there needed to be a little more in the story of the despair that would drive someone to willingly go to be knifed? More raw emotion coming through the polished writing?

The interaction with the cop was good - his appealing normality; his lack of understanding about the trans life which allowed you to tell us about it.

dam, thats all there is

Cross dressing lead me for bdsm for my dream sex.I always wanted to be bound and gang banged just one time.I should have though it thru before doing it.It was a lot rougher then i though it would .And there were more men then i wanted.There was only going to be three but six showed up to gang bang me.They tied me down legs tied in the air.They all took turns doing ass to mouth fucking my mouth and fucking me in the ass.They all filled me with loads of cum.When they finished a new group of men started were the first group finished off.

What a sad story. It was well written in that it pretty much told the true world of transgender hookers. I’ve known a few in the past as friends and the ones I knew were very nice people. One girl I knew was killed kinda like in the story. Some sick fuck cut off her penis and she bled to death. Sad cause she was really a sweet person.