All Comments on 'Fabienne and June Ch. 03'

Well my darling Pixie….what to say ? Another great chapter of not just fiction but also reality.

This story can never end…

I fear we have a slight rock-and-hard-place situation here, what with Fabienne's quasi-autistic reactions to certain situations and June's apparent unease with her lover's relationships with others. I am agog to see how they resolve matters.

Making love on a sofa or as us Aussies call it 'a couch' brought back so many wonderful memories. Except we ended up on the floor more than once.

Seeing love blossom, the uncertainties, the words we use that we don't always understand at that moment. The way you capture that is exquisite, so real. The confrontation in the church. Spot on, it seems, at least, what I have found is that hate comes from those who worship a god who teaches just love.

Thank you, my darling June - and I am delighted by your approval xxxxx Love you xx

As ever, darling Maonaigh, you identify the dynamic at the centre of the story xxxxx

The beginning of a romance — loved the way you created the tentativeness, questions asked and answered, love made erotic and beautiful. Yes, there looms the practical question of Fabienne’s term limits, but they are working through the relationship questions. And, of course, the way you wrote this piece — choice of words, dialogue, almost peaceful flow of action — created the desired sense of love in this piece. OK, caught up; really enjoy the two characters and their relationship. Thanks.

Yes, Darling Pixie, be yourself, be with the one you love. No more 3rd wheel, accessory to other people's kinky games.

You got your own game going now, and it's going splendidly.

I don't want to spoil your next chapter, but I have a feeling that Rector Alison pourrait faire un offre d'emploi afin de résoudre ton problème de séjour temporaire, alors.

Thank you, darling Bobbi, and glad I brought back memories. I am so glad you think I have captured that wonderful tentative state of first love xxxxx

Thank you so much, Migbird - that means a great deal to me xxxxx

Just WOW!!! This is developing into such a beautiful love story. The tribbing description is so hot! Thank you dear Pixiehoff. You make an old woman very wet! 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Need I say more?

Excellent chapter! Fun, sexy, and creatively written.

Now that they have declared their love for each other and found deep bonding through physical love, they will need to work through all the messy details of a lasting relationship.

You have artfully portrayed their insecurities and tensions, so I look forward to having you develop their characters.

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Pixiehoff crafts stories the way some people craft quilts, taking interesting scraps of real life & erotic fantasy and cleverly stitching them together to create one whole pleasing collage of a narrative. And like most crafty quilters, Pixiehoff often appears to customize her "story quilts" for specific individuals as Intimate personalized gifts. This latest piece is especially interesting given the dramatic shift from the original "quilt" that it's attached to. The transition from "Elle's adventure" to "Fabienne and June" demands that the reader appreciate Fabienne's unique worldview, and her ability to compartmentalize. I think the radical change in the "fabric" of the story is mostly "seamless" because Fabienne has demonstrated how single minded and dedicated she can be when she is motivated by love (or lust), and because June truly seems to trust and accept Fabienne at her word and by her actions. I look forward to June and Fabienne solidifying their relationship in the next chapter..........before Fabienne has to reurn "home". 🍿🍿🍿🍿🍿

Spring must be in the air!! The cherry blossoms are blooming and the song birds are a singing to each other. Just as the love and passion being brought to life for both Fabienne and June. It is a beautiful sight to see, equally as nice watching those cherry blossoms bloom and hearing those song birds sing.

How beautiful a first kiss is and as you Brits say , the first " snogg". One 's heart is filled with emotion having read these last 3 chapters and filled with eternal hope that good always wins out over... Elle who ?

I look forward to reading here to see how 'Fabienne' and June grow into and with each other.

Thank you darling Wolfie, and yes, you are correct, this is a love story. Oui, tu as raison dans ta supposition sur le Recteur et ses intentions, xxxxx

Thank you so much, Olwen. As you know, I do love giving pleasure xxxxx

Thank you, Paul. I do so appreciate your comments. Yes, the real test for our heroines lies ahead, and let us see how they cope xxxxx

Thank you, Anonymous, and yes, you are right, the story hinges on the ability of the writer to convey Fabienne's world view in a convincing manner. I am glad you feel that it is working. More of the quilt will be added soon xxxxx

Yes, darling Erica, the doves coo and the blossom blooms - as does love xxxxx

Just read this quote…It belongs here

“…..If someone truly loves you, they won’t tell you love stories, they will make a love story with you….”

Love you dearest Pix

Oh, darling, that's wonderful xxxxxx Love you too, MY June

Dear Pixie,

I attached your March Literotica statistics for your review / records.

I revamped your entire slide deck to create your statistics via your Pixie's Categories.

I hope you like your new slide deck format.

You will also find statistical data on your “Elle's Adventure: 15 Part Series,” that you recently completed, for your review.

I appreciate your comments on your new Literotica slide deck presentation.

I just hope your Literotica statistics’ file does not exceed your e-mail server limits.

Please, Enjoy Your Day Pixie and Stay Healthy & Safe.

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Jeff

Your Literotica Bookkeeper 📚📕📗📘’

Thank you very much Jeff xx

The absolute flow of your story moves me. Each moment has purpose, that is interwoven purposefully to the next.

Bravo Pixiehoff Bravo

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Thank you, Aoife, much appreciated xxxxx

💕, It's Wonderful, 5-Stars All The Way,,, Yes!

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Hallo Pixie!

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Queen Jackie, says June reminds her of the way she was when we first met, didn't want to share me with anyone.

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I ask Jackie if they work that out before Fabienne has to return home to France?

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And Love, what do you think she said with a smile?

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No Kat, I'm not going to tell you... you'll just have to read it yourself!

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When I read that part at the Cathedral, where that bitch started in on Fabienne and June, I felt myself instantly getting angry... Jackie just laughed, from your expression you must be at the Cathedral.

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Grrrrrr, 🙁 I forgot about that wild photographic memory of Jackie's.

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Jackie said, reading that reminded her of the Texas airport.

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We were at the Dallas Fort Worth International Airport, when an older couple came up to me and said, your family must be very proud of you, and just walked away.

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Wow, they really don't like lesbians!

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No Kat, it's me and you together, and my being black, that got them all worked up!

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As fate would have it, when we boarded the plane the two "white racist" were seated right behind us... after a few minutes we could hear them bitching under their breath... so those old fuckers want to bitch, we'll give them something to bitch about... I gave Jackie a big kiss, told Jackie how much I loved her and kissed her again!

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I seen the call light pop on, and heard them telling the flight attendant something... steward ask Jackie and I if there was a problem, Jackie said we're on our honeymoon what could possibly be a problem?

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The steward said oh here it is, Honeymoon Couple bumped up to first class... just come with me. ... Now I'm thinking (Wow, First Class,) but not Jackie, she ask "bumped up to first class" when did that happen? ... He told the stewardess here's a couple honeymooners, and told Jackie, just now!

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From your two kinky dike friends,

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The Black Queen 👩🏿 and Gay kat 👩🏼‍!

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That made me smile darling - good for you both xxxxx