by Alexis Haines
Alexis,
Your insights find the core of reality. His surrender scene brought tears to my eyes. In a way it is frightening to know one can see inside another to that depth.
'tis an excellent story; thanks for posting it.
That story was one hell of a ride. When he was first strapped in, I had to quit reading and get up from the computer. My heart was beating so fast I could hear it. You have given me something to think about that I have never considered before. Getting a reader to ponder the implications of your story is quite an accomplishment.
Thank you.
I usually do not like BDSM stories, but thought this one was great. Thank you for it.
this has been my favorite BDSM story yet...so well put together and so incredibly descriptive. great job!
What wonderfully and patiently developed chaeacters. And a story written so erotically that it captivated me through five pages when I usually balk after three. Bravo.
good story with a good ending and closure. so many writers cannot understand that if I want reality I can read the news paper but for entertainment a good story with a happy ending and no loose ends is a pleasure to read.
So very rarely do I see a switch relationship described in BDSM erotica. And the nod to safewords and discussion before play of limits was much needed. Thank you!!
I read this story every few months and each time it never fails to pull me in. It is simply one of the all time best stories on lit.
I love everything about this story except-why does her submission have to include the crude name calling? His didn't. Some one tell me how any of this makes her a slut whore? To me it cheapens the scene, just a check mark off the list of stuff to include. How much more wonderful that same scene could have been with a higher level of dialogue.
I do not understand BDSM, don't care to but I realize that there are those that do, need it, enjoy it. I do not fault them, more power to them if that is what they want and need. I thought this was an excellent story even if it does nothing for me, personally.