All Comments on 'Fall Lovin''

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litfan10litfan10almost 14 years ago
What a great story

Loved the character progression and development. Great dialogue. Mina and Greg absolutely steal the reader's heart. And gee, the sex was great too! So much detail thrown together to make this a wonderful read. Loved Clara as well. Nice job!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Very Good Writing And Plot

Excellent work!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I was hoping for more from this story! Pregnancy or engagement or something! Another chapter please. Very hot dynamic

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