All Comments on 'Fall of a MILF: A Submissive Tale'

need more.

The title says it all!

Different names.

More please!

Love your stories and this is a amazing story as well! Really hoping you do part two! Thank you for sharing your talent with us!

Loved it, I really hope you write more and continue the story. Thanks for a great story and a great orgasm as I read it :)

I love these stories of submission. I can relate.

The start of a new series

hot and detailed, full of the feel of submission not just the works, thanks

I am interested in more. Thanks

What an extraordinarily well told tale. We could see where it was heading from quite early on, but that took nothing away from the suspense. The best thing for me was the believeability, it followed such a logical path. I wish I could vote for 6 stars.

No corporate drone is ever going to open that email from an unknown sender, let alone clicking the link within. The rest of it just comes off as emotional abuse but at least it's different from your usual formula.

I love how much you understand and can describe the thrill of being submissive. It is so great to worship a Dom who loves to be in control. Definitely would love to see her be the Mommy slut. Then maybe they both service the cheerleaders together.

I enjoyed this story and will look for Daughter's Pet. 5 stars.

More please.

Yes more please.

more what a awesome story

Awesome!

Definitely interested in part 2

I think you will always be my favorite so anytime there is a chance for a part 2 I think we all need it.

Oh good god. That shouldn't have made me as wet as a I am.

This story failed to convince me, and led to the utterance of the Eight Deadly Words, "I don't care what happens to these people."

I count 20 positive (Including this post cause I liked it!) vs. 3 negative or other. So when it comes to continuing the series I say GO FOR IT!!!!!!

Great story. Predictable after reading your other stories but still very enjoyable.

An enjoyable beginning. Worth at least 1 more chapter

As always a great read, I look forward to a second chapter.

A masterpiece.

What a damn great read.

Almost all of your stories deserve atleast one sequel to help finish the plot

Wow you did it again! I didn't want this to stop.I've read so many of your stories and its like a new experience all over again!

Really awesome!

Another truly great story. But I just think that you have written the same background of story somewhere before.

You really can tell a great story. This would make a great series.

The story was itself good, but you have retold it I don't know how many times. Same basic set up just a few details are changed, such as the size of the tits, to where they work at, and a few others. But its the same basic story you have used for countless others. I like your work, but damn I wish you would try to branch out and get out of your zone a bit and try something new. Instead of getting to the end of page one and skim the rest and get to the sex.

I loved this story and I can't wait to see the story of Mistress Hailey! Please continue it soon.

I am really looking forward to the next chapter.

thanks for the supa hot story

Looking forward to

FALL OF A MILF: Daughter's Pet

I'm not into reading dominant/submissive stories, but then I read all the glowing comments so i decided to read this story and i wasn't disappointed. It was great and i do hope there will be a chapter two.

I really enjoyed this story. I can't wait for Daughter's Pet. I hope it is very soon.

Looking forward to chapter 2.

Loved this story, definitely need more chapters

Niiiccceeeee

well you are a great story teller i love reading your stories and would love to read lots more of this one in particular

This was great. The premise of this story is one of my favorite of yours. Consider this an official request to continue!

You continue to stand out as an erotic author on Literotica and anywhere on the web. Although there are some stories in between that I don't fancy too much (which is only natural) you are one of the very few authors who gets my attention any time you publish a new story.

This one is definitely at the top of what you published in the recent past from my point of view and it hit many of my kinks spot on. Please write the sequel. Really, I'm itching at all the right spots to read it.

If I may be so bold: grant her an orgasm while her lovely daughter milks mommy's huge tits and teases her about them.

so fucken hot cant wait for more

I absolutely loved this one. Megan was fantastic. And this ending...

What was my response?

Well... that is a completely different story.

...simply means that there will be more in the future. Can't wait! :-)

Another awesome story by the best Literotica author. My clit was tingling for the last three pages. Loved it.

I really enjoyed this story. Please do continue!

There is defiantly interest on my part!!!!!

I have been a reader of your stories since I joined this site and have never been disappointed by you. This is by far one of my favorites now and I can't wait for the next part of it

You nailed it! This is such a hot story! I was able to identify the "Canadian" right away, but still loved Heather's awakening! Much as my own! But in a reversed condition, I became the daughter slut!

Please write more! I would love to see what happens next. And I want to read about Hailey's side to the story

Please Write MORE!!!

Of course are we interested! And I would love to read more about the fall of the daugther.

Great story! Can't wait for the next installment.

Reread this story. Still 5 stars. Still waiting for the next chapter when Heather becomes her daughter’s pet. Would like to have Hailey’s submission to Megan and the other cheerleaders included.

Also, it is time for another chapter of “1950’s Housewife Lesbian Society”. Please!!!!

I would like to continue on by all means

That was a great story. Please continue it. Please have Megan use both the mother and daughter. Please have Megan take full control of both their lives and then sell them off as pet-sluts to the highest bidder.

wow

wow wow wow wow

That was crazy hot! Thank you :)

Please write the next one,

Came so hard from this one.

One of your best to my opinion,

Yet again,

You have so many bests!

Please write about the daughter!!!!!

Great story when can we have the follow up to it please hurry with it

continue story please

Really looking forward to the next story!!

Yes, please continue with the chapter of Fall of a MILF

I read Fall of a MILF carefully: I loved Submissive Tale and I really hope you continue the story, that possible submission to Hailey is exciting, I hope it includes anal sex

I've read alot of stories but this was beyond hot...definitely want the daughter involved..please!!

I love your work and this is a great story. Thank you for the stories.

I hope you finish this!!!

238. Well, I guesses her friend from “Canada” was her daughter or Megan. It was still a hot storyand needs to be finished. Please.

I’d be interested in more parts to this story.

I absolutely love this story. To have a part 2 or more would be incredible

I really enjoyed this story. More please!

More please

Soooooooo hot! I absolutely love your stories.

More please. So hot.