by WFEATHER
YOU REALLY HIT THE TARGET . A NICELY WRITTEN STORY THAT BREATHES HONESTY . A STORY THAT CAN BE BELIEVED . NICE JOB.
Having read several of your stories now, especially in the father/daughter incest arena, I am impressed with the subtle manner in which the sex takes place. No big screams of orgasmic fluff; no cock spewing its contents. Not that all that is not good reading, but the stories you have produced have a quiet, romantic, yet profound sexual element. Quite enjoyable. After all, the biggest sex organ in the body is the brain. Thanks.
SLOW THEN SUDDENLY DRASTIC ENDING. VERY POOR. AGAIN, THAT'S JUST MY OPINION.
I know this obviously wasn't a saga, it was short but written well enough to be beautiful. The love was obvious, special and intimate. Usually short stroke stories are so crude. Thank you for the difference, 5 stars and favorited.