by orie
All I've got to say is that I can't wail till the party!!!!
I like the way it goes slowly. Only don't include more people like Rita or Linda when Owen haven't had his cock inside Beckey's pussy yet. How about the shy Bridget, She could be included later on. And it would be nice if there are some humor included with sniffing of soiled panties, inhaling the women's musky pussy scent from the crotch of their panties and Becky get's embarrassed but excited.
Far from boring! You have a very interesting style. I envy your way with conversation. I like the way the women treat the naked male so casually. I hope you can keep it up! Well worth the effort, thanks
The Parisian interlude seemed a little wedged-in, but the rest of the story builds at a very enjoyable tempo. I can't wait for more.
And, IMHO, this is boring only in the sense that a drill might bore its way into a nice fresh hole. I'm looking forward to more of that kind of boring.
keep it going, please, and ignore all the negative b-s - this is very good writing, rich in detail, taking its time to get to the good stuff and keeping it real in terms of relationship and personality. reaaly enjoyed the second part, can't wait for more stories! thanks a lot!
From Brisbane. This entire series is senfuckinsational, and I loved it.
Another from Brisbane, highly erotic and well written - very envious of Owen!!
A wonderful, original story told with great restraint and a slow build-up, just the way I like it. I'm eager to read the follow up.
Great JOB!
Thanks !
Fantastic! I luckily read 'Modeling Class' first so had a better understanding of the relationship. Just fantastic!
Love the slow build up to this story. Eritic and heading into exciting times. Thank you
HOT, can't wait to see where it all goes. Why do negative comments come from Anonymous people? Guess their afraid to be "real"
So much time and patience and familiarity, and gentleness, as you all get closer.
Damn that was hot. The suspense kept me hard hard hard and the climax was superb!