by orie
I've decided it's the positive attitudes and behaviors of every one of your characters about sex.
It's a Win-Win-Win-Win-Win-Win!!!!!!
If you ever get to Music City....:+)))))))))
I just found your writings and I shall read them all. Wow, best stories on this site.
IMHO you are one of the best writers on this site, like the long build-ups.
I had read it before, and enjoyed it as thoroughly this time as I had the first time. You have a nice style, creating people who are really enjoyable to get to know. I'm glad to see you're still writing; it's probably safe to assume you won't write any more of <I>Familiarity Breeds Interest</I>, but it would be nice to hear more about the characters.
You're a good writer and I like the story line and the scenario but you're short on the erotic which requtres a bit more embelishment. Next chapter maybe?
Owen is terrific, I hope in future writing he matures and learns to pleasure women like Anne Marie as a dominant man. Don’t you think she would benefit from a good hard spanking in front of the women? Predict multiple orgasms and squirting.
Ann Marie has to control everything and everyone surprised they can go to the bathroom without her permission. She is ok to do everything with all but Owen needs her permission to have sex with anyone but her. Sucks.