All Comments on 'Family Affair: Backseat Sister'

Please please please continue this series, you're a very talented writer. It's been a while since I've read something this good.

A few things.

1) The sister moaning brothers name? Tired cliche. Please do better.

2) The sister literally said "LOL" in a sentence. It killed my boner in like no time at all.

3) Can't be romantic love between siblings and also lay the groundwork sworn for fucking mom. Realism is hot. Stretch the boundaries of reality, sure, but this read like a porno, and you're clearly capable of better work.

4) THE SISTER SAID LOL IN A SENTENCE. BAD GRAMMAR TAKES THE READER OUT OF YOUR STORY.

Step your game up.

I'm more of a Motherfucker kind of guy but I love the story and I would say go for a second part really maybe include mom or even grand mommy ;)

again great story good work

I definitly like your thought process ... can't wait for the next chapter. The only thing that could make it better is if it was one of your illustration stories...yum!

Absolutely love this story. I'm hoping for this to continue. Here are the story ideas I like from the list you provided:

1. Dad takes dick too

2. Orgy

3. Swapping tents

I always love reading your stories. Please continue this series, I would love to read them all.

I love all the ideas you've posted as continuations to the story. I look forward to reading them if you decide to write them. Just don't forget your other series in the process. We need more "What Mom Knows!"

Don't do the FAMILY AFFAIR: DAD TAKES DICK TOO!

All of the above syory ideas

great story, and all those ideas sound good too

I love the idea of backsear sex when others are in the car. With this one i would have them back in the back but this time he takes her anal cherry too. Keeping the theme towards family the mom tells them if their having sex to keep it safe, but the only thing available is the grandmas sleeping pills, so she drugs dad to sleep because in her words he wouldnt be ready to deal with this and he would want to just turn back and go home which she wouldnt want and tanya revealing her other dirty fantasy "anal" she wants that to be taken aswell while their on their trip.

So mum has drugged dad to sleep in the front seat, mums driving and the kids are in the back fucking and phillips taking tanyas other cherry with as much noise as she wants.

But thats just what i see could happen next. Goodluck and hope you continue.

It seems that you got your "Groove" back!

I always enjoy your stories and they are a great inspiration for my masturbation fantasies... I'm not into the gay aspect of porn so I won't read the daddy does dick chapter... But all the rest does get my motor running... Keep up the great work and keep us cumming .... Back for more... He he he

I agree with everything Thewild83 said

Your readers will tell you if.a story should be continued. Add my vote to all those below shouting yes. And dont forget aunty and grandma.

very hot story needs a part 2

Good story as always I think the bathroom with mommy or tent swapping are good ideas to follow but I would like to read more abouth the brother and sis

seems to me: Mom may have experience with her brother (kid's uncle) that Dad does/does not know about... this could turn into a real family outing at the next holiday gathering?

Please keep it up. Your my favorite!

you are a Great Writer, I enjoy everything you Post, Thank you

Another great story, another good cum. Please write another.

You do should the mother and daughter swap tents one next.

... With "Bathroom Mommy" followed by "Swapping Tents". You writing amazingly well, and hot stories. Looking forward to reading more in this series.

This was really good. Not a fan of the " dad takes dick too" idea but your the writer so by all means keep engrossing us in your tales

Just the right length and very enjoyable but why, why, why does there always have to be an 'anonymous' asshole who's so sure your story is crap, he has to hide behind anonymity. Further episodes? Why shouldn't mom have her share and why shouldn't sis have a rerun? Go for it.

Jasmine, anytime I see your stories I am drawn to read them. I am never disappointed and always hope for follow ons. You are a gifted and experienced writer so I leave it to your judgement as to whether there should be another story or not. Just know that I will be there reading it because it has your name on it. Thank you for your submissions.

Aside from the father being included, I would love to read more. What about mom's sister too?

For once you could do something different and not add another partner. Bringing the mom (and not dad) into the mix would be hot but you already did that in numerous stories.

Why not make a story about the brother/sister relationship? They had sex but what about the future? They said they loved each other so maybe they want to be together. The mother knows so she can help them to be together.

Anyway, the story was great (as always with your incest ones) and you are one of the best author on Literotica.

I for one vote continue. All those titles sound great, even the Dad Takes Dick Too. I've always have been a fan of gay incest, brother/bother, father/son, uncle/nephew, you get the picture. So don't worry about those few who cringe at gay incest and can only seem to handle lesbian incest because you do have some very willing readers who would love to read that story. 😉

Really..? Usually I like your "stories" very much and even up into the 'WOW' or should I say the "100%" of the best ~~ but get real here -- bumpy road and a bloody "Virgin" at that..! Bet there Dad really liked the new color of the back seat.!

C'mon you can write a better story than this as you have showed that many - - many

times over.!!**** My rant is over.^^

Except that dad takes dick too, I love all other ideas. Well written. Such stories should not be stand alone.

once again great. also agree no dad takes dick. need a little more nylon also. please keep going.

would say swapping tents so dad gets in on it too

Personally, I don't care for gay stories, so I'd skip reading that one. Excellent as always SSL

Great story, like usual. I would like to read all of your ideas, so please write them all for us!

I agree on the swapping tents..great story!

This was a good story, but really very similar to your already done 'Backseat Mommy' series so, as regards continuing, it might be going back to the well once too often.

Mom continued to be a voyeur in a dominant roll. Using her kids to fulfill fantasies of hers involving thanks and retribution. The sexual services of the children to a steadfast sister or brother. Payback for a slight from an aunt or uncle. I would enjoy this taking a turn to the dark side.

Let mommy have a ride too. And then he should knock up both of them.

Loved his sisters response

I think this is a rest beginning to a very fun and twisted family relationship. Stopping my grandmas house on the way home would be great after leaving. Them finding out it is a family tradition. Always great Silk and i cannot wait for your next one.

Hope you will follow up with the new series

you need to add the mom into it

Crazy threesome would be interesting

Mom needs to go for a ride, possibly the threesome previously mentioned

Either the threesome or dad loves cock too would be great. Or both.

loved it i say threesome or bathroom but plz no gay

And yes a part 2,3,4,....etc. Will be great.. Good stoirie telling

I think mom wants a ride

Yes, continue the story. More brother-sister and Mom being OK with it, keeping Dad ignorant. Maybe Mom demands a romp with son as payment to keep cool?

always love your stories, read them all at least once....keep up the awesome work.

Great story hope you continue the good work

I iike the idea of bathroom mommy or crazy threesome

great job keep it coming

I like the idea of Mom being supportive and the kids doing the fucking.

So I'm just guessing that nineteen-year-old pussy doesn't smell like pussy anymore???

Would love some all-in-the-family action...

That was so hot and well written, but that ending was a major plot twist. Can't wait to see what you have planned next. Mom? More sister? Dad?

Everyone sounds fucking hot.

do not let dad get involved

One of the very best I have ever read. I'd vote for a continuation using your suggested title; FAMILY AFFAIR: CRAZY THREESOME

Son pleases Mom & Sister while Dad is away. That could get as crazy horny as Backseat Sister ever was.

The pace and feeling of the story is very good , How ever i wouldnt like to see the daughter become a full on sex god now , An inoccent girl who just loves her brother is perfect for this story . And the daf shouldn't be involved , Too many stories involve the dad and ruin the pace of the story ,

good writing and have an amazing day/night

Hi

Thanks to all the on this story.

I have so many possible ways this may go that my head has been spinning.

I started part 2 but now may change the direction slightly... To Family Affair: Backseat Sodomy. Not sure, but maybe,

To the critics:

As for bleeding... She broke her own hymen... most girls do... I did.

As for similar to Backseat Mommy... Other than backseat sex I do t think there are many similarities... I also used a different perspective ... mom in backseat mommy verses the Mae view here).

As for pussy smell... Good point.... Alas this is a story about backseat fucking and I would imagine it there had to be a bit of stretching the grips of reality for such a story.

After all... This is fantasy.

Jasmine June 30th

Lots of potential. Keep the erotic work flowing

Yes, an excellent erotic story !! Well, Mom I think wants to be screwed by her son or maybe joining brother and sister; when Dad's away. If her brother shows Mom the video; I am sure she'll get very aroused too. Of course, Tanya and her brother need to go at each other when their parents are Not home and have to figure out a way to keep this going when she's away at college ?? Maybe, he can go too ?? In any event; after the washing machine episode, this is too hot as is the car trip to just let it go. Cannot wait for this series to continue. Thank you !!!

Agree with those who've said explicitly couching this as romantic love only to start adding participants to the mix would make no sense. You tend to escalate things to the point of diminishing returns, and that would be an example.

Mom should switch places n ride son

Just get the Mother in to make sure she keeps the secret! (and end it at 2 chapters).

I'd love to see the mum have a quickie with the son while the dad's in the shower, then teach the sister how to suck and fuck like a champ.

Painful to read. Move on and kill this.

That's good start keep it going

This story was perfection!

Between continuing the story or letting it end here. I'm on board with all of your ideas including the father-son bit. You write gay male so well it makes a straight guy like me hard. But I would like a romantic story between brother and sister since you've done something similar with "cocksucking college sister". I vote that you continue with the mother and daughter threesome, the dad getting into it and the eventual orgy. But whatever you decide I'll know I'll love it. Whew!

* * * * * Excitingly erotic / beautifully dirty. Great final line "..... brother's cum in your hair." This definitely requires a sequel - I vote for "Bathroom Mommy". I love silk stockings, garter belts and wet panties.

Love, anon j. o.

I honestly loved the story, and want to read all of the ideas you have to continue it. Please continue!

Swapping tents sounds very interesting! as does Threesome!

I think the threesome with mom & sister sounds like an awesome second part

I loved the story and premise, however, I did struggle with the guy getting on his knees. Sorry, but dad would figure something was up with that move. It became a bit unreal at that point. Continue on with mom, sis and brother...that would be a great story!

Ultimately, however you decide to pursue it is your call. On the one hand, without taking a little risk, there's no chance at a big payoff, especially with a series of stories. On the other hand, this story is solid enough to be a standalone, with a very self-contained plot and few, if any, loose ends that need tying up.

If it makes the decision any easier, you could always put a few other stories out and return to this when you feel more confident.

At first before I started reading I thought it would be just another story, how wrong was I. Loved the build up and the characters got me hard and stroking. Loved moms comment at the end about brothers cum in her hair. Mom and son have to get it on. In fact any of the subjects would be awesome.

make second part please !!!!

Fantastic! Really look forward to moree parts to this story

Can't wait for more.

Five Stars.

Loved this story and I love ALL of your ideas for continuation - just please, continue!

Great story! And I love the swapping tents idea!

That was so unbelievable hot. Please do more

Great as a stand alone. Well written, but please have at least a part 2 to ease that cliffhanger at the end of part 1

yes you can keep it going, in the UK our age laws are lower than in the US

I can just picture this happening to someone, somewhere. Makes me wish I had a (horny) sister!

I'm bisexual (male), so I enjoy your stories that have an element of f/f or m/m content, but also like to read stories with the 'family' element as well.

This one feels like it could involve people on the mother's side of the family. Perhaps the cabin is a large one, owned by wife's family for generations, and plenty of rooms/space. Another family could join up this (or another weekend), and the mixing of new stories experiences could continue. 'Boys fishing weekend', 'Ladies annual event', New Years with 2 or 3 families. The kids' cousins could provide the foray into various relationships (d/s, m/m, f/f), etc... Even had a selfishly fleeting thought that a brother/sister cousin of theirs was a crossdressing sissy, submissive to the older sister

Just a few thoughts from an appreciative reader, think you have the makings of a really good extended story

Very good....keep going on this story !

I think you need at least a second chapter after you left off with "you still have some of your brother's cum in your hair." Contrary to what most others said, the father would have to pretty dense to not have an idea something was going on with his children. The Mother obviously knew and by her reaction maybe knew before or had a hand in what happened. I like most of your ideas except no gay definitely and I usually just browse through the lesbian part unless it is part of a heterosexual act also. Extended family as some suggested is ok, but I have seen some get way carried away. I personally like daddy/daughter mixed with family. Example, Mom helping daughter fuck dad and son comes in while they are at it and bangs mom. To me the story goes downhill after the climax and to me the a climax in such a story would be when the daughter cries "I'm cumming Daddy, cum with me and in me." At the same time I don't get off on fathers getting their daughter pregnant, so safe sex should be practiced.

I know ... that's what she said.

Please write another chapter

Keep writing this series

Bathroom Mommy sounds good. I enjoy all your writings

write stories for all of the new ideas, your chapter 2's are just fine

Bathroom Mommy

Very good. Would enjoy more chapters.

These sound good:

FAMILY AFFAIR: BATHROOM MOMMY

Mom decides she needs a ride on her son's big cock.

FAMILY AFFAIR: CRAZY THREESOME

Son pleases Mom & Sister while Dad is away.

FAMILY AFFAIR: ORGY

A heavy storm leads to fun in the tent.

Bathroom mommy for sure!

doesn't mother ride in the back on the way back

More but leave dad in the dark