All Comments on 'Family Affair: Bathroom Mommy'

that was one hot chapter. you have to of started writing more because its been to long since the last chapter.

though adding to the ending i would of had tanya bouncing on the cock while hes finishing the pluming to get herself off again before heading back down

up next in that order i hope

I love where you took this. A great addition. I like most of your ideas of where to go next. I would leave the Dad out of the action, but that's just me.

The second one is the one that I would definitely read and I think a lot of others would to. Anal could also be worked into that as well. Dad takes dick is still for some reason interesting to me but I think that would make a good first half of another chapter (part two could be a family orgy).

I read all of your stories and this one takes the top easily, it made me cry with laughter and now I expect a lot of the future chapters. Damn, who knew mom was such a slut...

5*!!!

Find and replace name and it is any other mommy story you have done. It is not clever. It is repetitive amd painful to read. Try something original.

You dad loves cock is a no for me. I know it's one of your themes but it's not my thing. If you do it I 'll stop reading this story.

I liked this twist. Wasn't expecting the mom to go after the son AND daughter. This was pretty damn hot and I did cum reading this. As for the three choices, I think they're all great. I would like the dad takes dick one to be done before the threesome. Then save the sister tri-sex-ta for last unless this is going to be like a choose your own adventure book. Will grandma be getting involved too?

A very enjoyable twisting and turning tale. PLEASE give us more of this story and maybe bring Grandma into it as well by making her son a motherfucker as well, WOULDN'T that be something? !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

don't make the Dad his slut too and don't make the Boy fuck his dad just dont

Awesome - can hardly wait for the next installment. :)

Silkstockingslover is a very Diverse writer , this series is one of best that has been written . It addresses mother / daughter , brother / sister and son / mother Incest . The setting of a vibrating washing machine was tried by myself and my first wife in 1981 , hint ( if the load is unbalanced there will be more vibrations ) .

Jolly Good Read !

I like your story.Especially when the Mom is talking with her husband on the phone while her son is silently fucking her.

please have some more stories similar to this.

Amazing story i loved it.(also the first one)

for a future story i would like the Bikini Beach Anal. because i don't like gay action and the mom & sister & brother while dads away is kinda just a repeat of this.

Loved it. As to the next chapter, either the anal or threesome would be cool. Not into Dad/Son stuff.

Add granny and strangers

How about bikini beach and threesome at the same time

Absolutely wonderful. Once again 5 Stars. The part where mom is talking on the phone was really hot. I like all three of your ideas as a follow up and perhaps a few other ideas.

As usual, you are the best author on this site!

This serious is on track to be some of the best incest erotica I've read in a VERY long time!

I'm casting a vote for "Crazy Threesome;" I know a lot of people will likely get upset at this, but I *love* the idea of the father never being part of it. Leave him the unsuspecting cuckold with an undersized endowment, and let his son handle all the bedroom work that needs doing!

Both the beach and the threesome. Sharing Mom's tent.

Maybe dad and grandma, by themselves.

But whatever you do will be good.

As a published author and ghost author, researcher, freelance writer, and technical corporate writer, I sincerely appreciate a well-written story. Bravo! On top of being well written, this hits several of my hot buttons. Well developed story, plausible, and enjoyable. I rate it 4.5 erections but couldn't get the rating function on the page to work. :(

Allinthehead's motion has been seconded and thirded. All who agree please submit your comments now. All those opposed (unless you are the author) please leave now (how did you even get in here in the first place).

Please do FAMILY AFFAIR: CRAZY THREESOME !

Crazy threesome please!!!

Threesome and sister losing anal virginity. Please....

threesome no gay stuff please would really ruin the story

Threesome please! The sister losing her anal virinity too would be great.

Brilliant so far, please don't get dad or any other man involved I'm sure that would destroy the story for most of your readers.

This story is going to be awesome ! I really enjoyed reading it :) I don't think get the dad involved would be great though so i'm going to vote for the threesome.

Please don't add that dad one!

Please write more

A lot of hate for dad getting involved but that does not mean the story should be excluded. It is a niche I am sure a number of readers would enjoy. Those that don't can always avoid reading it if they aren't into it. Everyone has their own kink and someone's dislike for another's should not prevent everyone from having a story written that relates to their own kink if the author already has the premise for it in their head.

wow another really great story , really enjoyed can't wait to read more

I love your writing so i will make this short and sweet.If you do make a three some have it so the grandmother finds out about them and have a bit of fun getting herself off and then joining in.Then try and leave the father out of your stories they are great without him,

With mom being a slut for her kids, I think they should degrade her a little. Maybe cleaning them both after sex or even a little water sports.

Another great story. I'd like to see all of the possibilities unfold ; bikini beach sister AND dad takes dick. Would love to read about he dad being a slut for the son and whole family.

All three possible stories sound amazing. Can't wait.

All three options are fine.

I agree with the post a few down, a little water sports can b very intimate. It was an act of total submission and acceptance and I thing it would be in line with the sisters character to do this for her brother.

Again, great job!!!

All three, of course!

Maybe help perk up Granny, as well.

I love the first two in the series would love to read family affair: bikini beach anal and family affair: crazy threesome

Bikini Beach Anal

& Crazy Threesome

make the most sense based on what happened so far. I think you should at least drop a hint of it before going into Dad Takes Dick Too.

What about Swapping Tents? We could watch

Phillip & Mom as well as Tanya & Dad.

First or second proposed are fine for me.

I think you should make the next chapter start with sister and brother in the tent for the night and then the threesome on the beach the next day.

More please!!!!!!! Please start with them fucking in the tent

I would love the suggestion from part one, of the tent swapping. My toes are curled waiting for it!!

nice job!! i would prefer the tent swapping or beach story!

My erection has little brains but what is there says need more of this

Can't wait until the brother fucks her virgin ass

Family Affair: Dad Takes Dick Too

You really need to write FAMILY AFFAIR: BIKINI BEACH ANAL - Sister loses all three virginities in one day.

This is a great series with jam packed potential.

Too good to leave it as such.Soo much potential.

Great story as always Hun keep it cumming can't wait to read what happens next

I really liked the first part. I find second part too vulgar and too rushed. No anticipation just straight sex. Everything you've build on the first part, suspense, fear of getting caught, playful dialog, gone.

My vote is the Crazy Threesome where mom helps the daughter lose her anal virginity (ATOGM?), followed by Dad Takes Dick Too.

I definitely think FAMILY AFFAIR: BIKINI BEACH ANAL should be next.

Eagerly waiting for the next part. Pls don't scrap the idea of him with his dad. I like it.

I would LOVE to read about the father and son having sex!!! You should totally write that story!!!!

I want him to fuck his granny too.

This story, as all your others, is excellent. Please, continue this series with the Crazy Threesome variant of possibilities.

This 2 part series definitely needs to be expanded! Please keep writing. Great imagery.

5 more stars!

I really dig all of your writings, and I don't have any problem with gay or bi porn, but can I just suggest that you keep the dad out of this? I really like the idea of the son ruling the house, and I kind of don't want anyone else fucking the sister, because you did kind of set up a romance for them too.

GREAT Story!! Please continue this series.

Like Anonymous said, and I did in my 1st comment, this story would be better if the dad continues to be left out. The son ruling the nest and both son and daughter domming the mom is an interesting and exciting twist. Plus, you DID establish the beginnings of a deeper emotional relationship between the son and daughter. Providing a MM connection with the son and the dad would threaten that and undo some of the groundwork you've already laid. (That wasn't a challenge to your writing ability; more of an objectively stated preference. LOL!)

Very good work! Looking forward to Chapter 3!

X-Man

Can you do the beach day but with the threesome

why does the first story look like it's written in code?

are delicious to watch.

When the tone changes to degradation, and humiliation it is a turn off.

Dear old Dad is spending the afternoon with his mother while the other three are fixing the plumbing at home.

Mom volunteers to switch seats with her daughter for the ride back home. They have to take boxes back to the city after helping sort through the accumulation at grandma's house.

This is a story that should be continued. Looking forward to the next chapter. Please do it soon.

Crazy Threesome with a twist. Like mentioned earlier, while mom and sis are busy eating the son's cream pies, dad is busy tossing his mom's salad before filling her ass like a Twinkie. Now....get busy....please!!! lol

I would like you to leave the dad out completely. I want the three of them to have a HEA.

I want to see dad get involved.

This is excellent! Now Jasmine, can you get Granny involved as well?

Vince

Hi Lovely Lady...While I have read from the top to the bottom of your delicious stories, I must have missed this one...I kinda thought that a Swap on the way home....but...a Double Swap...Mom gets off...complains...daughter grudgingly Swaps back...I can see it NOW...IT'S ALL IN MY MIND...yeah, but U gotz the words to put it in a story... if-n U wanna...😊

Man this story here is fantastic! I truly have enjoy this very much!!!!

Was it just me or did anyone else get the feeling that the dad was fucking his mom(the grandma) while on the phone with his wife who was getting plowed by their son? I would like to see that added in to the sequels if possible

Either of the first two scenarios or both together.

Please have dad take dick too

Like the title says, please give us more of this

Loved the story, made my cock rock hard. Looking forward to next chapter.

FAMILY AFFAIR: BIKINI BEACH ANAL 

is there ever coming a next chapter???

BIKINI BEACH ANAL

or

CRAZY THREESOME

I'd like to see all THREE of the titles! Of course, I pretty much like everything you write.

Youre one of my favorite authors and your stories are hot! This series needs to continue, either with bikini beach anal or crazy threesome, save dad for last!

This is a great story line. It would be nice if you kept it going.

It would be fucking awesome

Could read these for days, any variation!

I would love to see how this story line continues. Hope to read more before long

Yep, just please right more

Great start, would really enjoy reading the rest or the series when/if completed.

Any of these, i would love to read 'em all

Soo wet reading this

I love your stories

I would love to see you do the crazy threesome one.

like the sister one I have now read this is the third time I have read this.

i love jacking off to this series and I NEED MORE

I'm waiting for the next chapter. Keep writing.

For the next one just have the three if them still but leave out the dad please

Please continue this storyline. I'd really like to see the Crazy Threesome!

Thanks for the good chapter can't wait to read more of this please continue the story

If you decide to extend this story, I vote for "Crazy Threesome". If it turns out to be "Bikini Beach Anal", I'm O.K. with that too, but honestly, I hope we never see anything about a gay dad. No offense to gay folks, but that's just a total boner killer for me.

You’re awesome ! Can’t wait for bikini beach to come !!

Leave the Dad out of it though, maybe add cousins or something