All Comments on 'Family Business Ch. 02'

Try to write it as a single chapter, losses flow. And add oral sex before penitration. Eating and drinking mom's pussy under her office table while she talking to her colleague. Or colleague catching mother and son while mother squirting into son's mouth with her skirt above her hip and one leg above the table, trying not to spill & aiming the stream into his mouth , stoping occasionally to let him swallow. Write such a story like that please,... waiting eagerly for your next story.

Thank you, like the other guy said, want to see an office mom next time

Really enjoyed your tale of this threesome!!!!!!

Loved the story but would have enjoyed it even more if the first part had included the son smelling, kissing and sucking his mother's pussy.

Hot mom son sex, can't wait for him to fuck Monica. Keep up the good work please!

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The story is good till now, mixing professional thing with sex was good choice, just hoping its not one of the story were son says he love his mother only to pimp her out to his friends.That goes against love.

So it would be better without Male client.

For next chapter not as much flashbacks are needed.

The uniform I would have them wear would start with stiletto heeled thigh boots, pleated micro skirts, G-strings, and tie or zipper front crop tops all in PVC material, so the material looks wet, but the oils & lotions are easy to just wipe off.

PVC looks like leather but it is entirely synthetic, costs less to buy and is easier to clean. They can wear black, red, blue, white and other colors rotating their outfits, so the outfits don't wear out as fast, maybe hire another sexy girl (either from their old job or a female family member looking for work).

A classy uniform with skirt with split, nylons and heels would be okay for me. Maybe using the milking table to whip an bottle enough cream from the man to use it for women's faces. But I leave it to your imagination.

5 stars. very hot and sexy. just what i needed on thanksgiving weekend to get me going!

looking forward to the next part.

Mom teasing son by showing her squirting into a glass behind her husband

Absolutely!!!

Ah, just please don't have the women stray from Linc.

You can can add another layer. Have Monica's hubby be a burgeoning cuckold, and is coming to realize he loves the idea of young Linc owning his wife. Just an idea.

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Love the threesome! It will be interesting to see how the business goes especially with that milking table. In regards to your commenters, that's some weird shit they're suggesting. lol

I'm okay with the ending as is, any more and it tends to start veering off into the absurd and much less than a mother/son love story it started out as. Just my two cents worth but a five nevertheless.

Great story, love the flow and the build up. Flashbacks worked well giving the history of Francine’s illicit mission to bed the son. A prequel of the torturous journey to success would even be a great story. Keep it going.

It always frustrated me as an average or slightly less than average penis. Most of time the writers describe the women as beauties size 12 or greatly less. This time you added a lady similar to a woman who did not lose or even attempt to childbearing weight in her hips and ended up with hip at least an axe handle wide and almost as deep, requiring the impossible length dick to reach the promised Land. I know this as my I have had the issue with wives that are in this category and unable to satisfy without long toys

Really enjoyed your story. Can't wait for the next part.

This story is great can’t wait to see what happens next

Very enjoyable (5stars). Made me smile. Finished IMHO.

Like!

Can not wait for the next chapter. Fantastic read.

Fun upbeat and well written. Really can't wait for the next part.

Great series! Next part, please.

Wonderful story, I do think it would be nice to read more of this series for it has a lot of potential........():\

Brill story, can't wait to read more.

Fun tale. Needs completing.

What a great story, but it needs a continuation. The work, and play, leading up to opening day. The first day, first month, first massage, first facial, and many other firsts that have yet to be described! Keep this going. There are so many possibilities for this story. Keep this going. 5⭐

I would life to read more chapters and hope you will considder writing more soon.

Too good not to continue