All Comments on 'Family Estranged Ch. 07'

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Amiable69Amiable695 months ago

Pure filth. Love it!

TwistedDaveAuthorTwistedDaveAuthor5 months ago

Kitty... I think I am in love... You have inspired me... You are my muse. Can't wait for the next installment.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Great story can't wait to see how it ends I love most of your other stories just was wandering if you were going to anymore with your Final stop Moscow story

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Great story by one of my favourite authors on this site!

story_hunter07story_hunter075 months ago

1. Breeding them is a good idea. It would enhance your stories if you included breeding in all your non-consent stories and also be a little creative about it.

2. You can continue on the breeding and incest part in the next and final chapter.

Also, an overall feedback for all your stories so far - What most of the stories miss is a bit of psychological eroticism and realism aspect (refer to KingBoorwa stories here). Also, sex is a bit too easy, too quick and has very little build up. Hope you improve on all these.

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