All Comments on 'Family First Ch. 10'

Good and long, very hot.

Are the absent siblings gonna discover this new family dynamic soon ?

Gave it a 5* but I will have to reserve my whole day tomorrow to read it though in entirety since I have too many thing to do today. Thanks for writing this and putting it out in whole!

...and I enjoyed all of it and then some more. Thank you for giving us this chapter and thank you for putting it out in one piece - not only does it provide great read material but also gives us the uninhibited view of the story progression by which we can better asses how and where this is all going.

Cristina and her dad part of the story went by a lot faster and easier than I expected it to, there was of course a lot of emotion but her really did everything for his princess and it showed in his every move and in her amount of pleasure and love for him and by him. The lingerie, the champagne and the necklace were a nice touch that once more showed the support of the family in this and shows it's about more than just getting their rocks off. Shame we have to wait until part 11 to see how the morning goes and what other surprises they have for each other.

Danny and the nasty trio on the other hand is a whole new ball game and to say it delivered a lot more than expected would be an understatement. Not only did this section deliver sexual in abundance in form and partnership but also some serious internal turmoil for the participants and in case of Danny and aunt Diane also some much needed emotional catharsis from way in the past. It was a great read and quite fun at moments but the best part was still the thing that they either thought before engaging in sex of after because of it, like Dianes fear of Tims package or when Danny spilled his beans on watching her.

Guess there is more to life than sex, but then again some real skinship and bonding brought the family closer than ever so I can only assume there is only up from here. And hopefully there is some happiness for Danny & Cristina in the long run, the family likes them together and supports them way too much for it to fall through.

In the end it was another 5* worthy performance even if we had to wait eleven moths for it!!!

I agree with Captain _Fapulus he said mostly what I thinking but I 'm going add my review on the chapter it was a great sexual tableau of family love and new understanding of bonds and Diane and Tim cleared the air also explored their attraction to each other Diane got watch Danny and his mom which she enjoyed . But I liked the dictomny between Christina. and Diane between the on their fellow family members in each section of the chapter I loved it all the same, the sex was engaging and nasty and loving too, because it left me wanting more for the next chapter and please don't take to long with the next one. I liked this super sized chapter compared with your other ones. Chapter 11 can't come fast enough ! Cheers ErrantZebra

This was definitely worth the wait. I do hope chapter 11 cums along much faster. Can't wait for the morning after with Christina and her father. Where are Tim and Mary's daughters in all this? And when is John coming home?

Just read all 10 chapters one after the other. Mr. Zebra, please keep on sending delicious frissons into the readers' bodies and let us enjoy Ch. 11 soon. Thank you.

Amazing story...just one thing I didn't like is that Christina's thinking that she can find anyone other than Danny because all of this started because of her love towards Danny...you are a good writer but not a consistent one...if you will take another year just to write another episode I dnt think I will even remember what happened un this story so try to be more frequent in giving update

Incestuous fucking turn me on Wording incestuous slut or whore

Sisterfucker motherfucker use in next chap

It very turn on 555 . Sorry for my poor english

Please have alot of father/daughter stuff in the next chapter.

Not much as i hoped in this chapter sadly, especially after all the waiting for it to happen.

Just wondering if Christina and Olivia will be getting together, and then bring Danny in with them.

So far the best incest story on Literotica. The story was well written w/out too many mistakes. (Actually, there were only two) Liked the way you develop the characters. WELL DONE. 5 STARS + in fav.

WALL TO WALL SEX!!! i was hard the whole read. well-written, great, loving characters. nice storyline. very erotic and sexy - just a fantastic story. I don't care how you take it - you have done such a GREAT job with this so far - but hopefully they'll be more - and soon!!!! you're a fantastic writer!!! THANKS

I look forward to many more chapters...one of the best I've read on Literotica. Well done!!

Great story I Love It

I Love your writing I look forward to read continue.

Great story I Love It

I Love your writing I look forward to read continue.

Family First: 10 Part Series

Family First Ch. 01 (10)

Family First Ch. 02 (10)

Family First Ch. 03 (10)

Family First Ch. 04 (10)

Family First Ch. 05 (10)

Family First Ch. 06 (10)

Family First Ch. 07 (10)

Family First Ch. 08 (10)

Family First Ch. 09 (10)

Family First Ch. 10 (10)

Great stuff and great characters.. I had commented on one of your earlier chapters..You have left us hanging since April for Chapter 11 and much, much more.. need the rest of the family to join in!!

Trust me. I haven’t forgotten about this story or the people who have been patiently waiting for Ch. 11. Much of the next chapter has been drafted, but there’s still a lot of work left to do. Unfortunately, the time I have to write has been limited/non-existentent lately, so I can’t even begin to guess when I’ll actually have a chance to finish the chapter. I wish I had better news, but I at least wanted everyone to know that this story is very much in the back of my mind every day, and I’m really hoping I’ll have a chance to get back to it soon.

-EZ

A little disappointed to know that this will take some time but heartened that it will happen..This fan will certainly wait - once again, great work!

But now I want to know what's going to happen with the twins,Olivia,and even John.

Glad you’ve been enjoying it! Olivia will play a bigger role in chapter 11, but we won’t find out the full truth about her until chapter 12. John and the twins are also still a few chapters away.

For those who have been patiently waiting on the next chapter, know that I’m still working as hard as I can on it, but my day job continues to intrude. I have a long holiday coming up, during which I’m hoping to complete the draft of Ch. 11. I also have a few other shorter stories I’ve been tinkering with when the Family First muse isn’t cooperating that I’m looking forward to sharing with you all.

As always, thanks for everyone’s patience!

-EZ

It will be a year since Chapter 10. Pls don't forget this loyal reader - and many others..Chapter 11 and more please!!

No trace of Ch.11 so far...shame, I was looking forward to it

I submitted chapter 11 on Saturday, but it takes time for Lit to approve it and post it on the site. For some reason (maybe due to the length?) it took extra long this time. In any case, it’s up now! Hope it was worth the wait!

I started chapter 12. Really well written, great erotic storytelling. I’m looking forward to reading the new chapter.

i meant chapter 11 in my comment below. maybe just enthusiastic about hoping there is a chapter 12!!!

Zebra, I am really enjoying your work. It is awesome that you are able to transition from a slow and loving encounter to pure raunch seamlessly. Great, great work.

I am loving this story and can't wait to read more

First, thank you for continuing the storyline. I am totally absorbed by the families and characters involved in the Family First series. I was pleasantly surprised that chapter 10 was so long. But as I continued to read, it made sense to include both Christina and Danny and their respective encounters in the same chapter. That said, WOW! As usual you have woven in the story in such a way to keep us engrossed and wanting and anticipating more.

I think I said in a previous post how in awe I am of your ability to maintain all these characters and the relationships they have with family members. Instead of goofing up in this area, you have chosen to keep all the players in the right mental scenario each of them needs to be. Thank you for that.

I also cannot imagine how much time it must take to draft the chapter, self-edit and rewrite then submit to someone else to further edit and further re-write, then send for approval for publishing. You are very dedicated and we, your readers, are very appreciative of your skills. Thank you.

This was totally awesome. As many times that the characters are cumming in this chapter, I have cum at least five times with my wife and sister in law. We are enjoying it completely and trying to see how we might try to get others involved. I used to date my sister in law when we were I college. My wife would love to fuck her sister in law's son, but we do not want to really go there as we might screw up what we have right now. My wife and sister in law are not getting cheated out anymore because since we started reading this, we went outside the box and have had a couple of men and one guy 18 that plays the role of a son of ours in the action that we knew from our past. So we are trying some of the things in this story. Wish your story would never end.

You writing is enthralling and exciting. I can’t wait until the next chapter.

Binge read all chapters.. still a work in progress, or... has it, like so many other multi part stories in the digital world... been.... abandoned?

Not abandoned! I have very little free time for writing at this particular stage in my life, but I’m hard at work on Ch. 12. The going is slow, but it is definitely happening.

As an avid reader of incest stories, this is probably one of the best written and logically developed multifamily member incestuous love story I have ever read. Character development is so complete that the reader wants the story to be nonfiction.