All Comments on 'Family Secrets'

the type of story you write,you in a class by yourself.great job and keep the stories coming.

and so rambling it's almost impossible to follow.

While incest is distasteful to most people, I found this story to be quite sensuous and romantic. Despite the underlying violence, this is one of the best stories I have recently read on Literotica with more than enough sex to keep me happy! Jim, you are obsessed with incest but who cares? Please keep them cumming. Pete.

You mentioned the sister who went off to college, what about her story?

Good job and keep on writing.

mikey

Due to the I P and bigots, I haven't, lately, been able to respond to much. But only now do to the "best of the best".

Thanks man for an original, when so much is just repetition!

Well done!

. . . fucking erotic literature. But then, everybody knows that. Well, except for those who don't like fucking sex.

It's too bad your writing doesn't live up to your hype.

One of the best written and thought out stories I have read on Lit!! I agree with one of the other writers, tell us Gail's story too.

I really liked the lady character in this story. She played a damned fantastic role in this story!! Very well done sir!

Great reading as always

Your stories are always wonderful ... I look forward to every single one. Thank you for writing them

nolatrinity

find out what happened to Gail - did her father rape her too - he was enough of a bastard to do so

You write with amazing insight into how a woman feels...for a Man. Wonderfully done!

i think this was 1 of the best stories i have read so far keep up the great work. one question though are u jewish?

hey scouries,

i've read most of ur stories and as i go along i rate each one, thanks for the stories they really are incredible.

I'm nicely reading along and all of a sudden it dawns on me 'hey, this was in the incest section... Whats the deal?' and then she starts talking and I feel like a complete moron. Anyway, great story, they all are!

Dave

Am new to this site. But this story was great. Wont see a story like this on any other site

I read others, but I lways come back to yours..don't let you pen or your P...run dry.

Well done, despite what some readers have commented. You build the characters really well (not "rambling" at all) & the endings are usually great. Keep it up. Glenn

Great work Dude.

Good plot, excellent approach more over very much appealing.

Keep on writing stories. Don't ever stop writing them.

Sadly, I can relate to the violence - but I loved the story!

Really liked it... very hot.

This story beings to the front some of the problems that come to a marriage.

Abuse being just one of the most glaring. Being retired Law Enforcement I have seen too much of the bad things that come when a person believes his/her mate property.

Keep up the good work.

Chuck

Let's see now...

Who does a story of a daughter being daddy's "special" girl and later having sexual relations with her own son?? Oh I know...ME!

Thanx,

Abbey

read. (I'm starting with the top of the list at "A" and working to the bottom. Since this was an "F" - not for failure, but for fuckin' good - I have a long way to go.) I "knew" that she was Donny's sister, somehow, just didn't try to figure it out. You know, trying to be too cerebral with sex stories is a waste, just let them flow. The conclusion will cum soon enough as it did in this one. And, you just knew there would be a confrontation between the son and the father. But it WAS GOOD! And EROTIC, and that's what this site is all about. Outside of the story and the ever present huge cocks, I just had the thought that the main characters here were pretty typical in their reactions. The girl kept saying that it was wrong, that we can't, all the ways of saying "no" to sex, while leading him on with words and actions and putting herself into situation that virtually guaranteed that she would get fucked. And, he was a typical guy that had to show off his hard-on (huge hard-on, that is), touch himself, touch her, put her in situations that suggested sex and finally, forcing himself on her, not as violently as Daddy, but against her "no, no, no" exclamations. Rather typical behavior - the guy keeps pushing, advancing the situation, until sex is inevitable, and the gal keeps resisting, yet yielding a little each time while continuing to keep him stimulated so he couldn't back off. I like the games people play, I enjoyed playing them, I wish I could play them again instead of just reading about them. Fortunately, we have a good writer who continues to remind me of the "good, old days."

Short story, but very good, unlike many stories I read just to get off, yours was an entertaining and emotional ride.

Good plot line and well written. The author teases the reader along nicely with a well placed word or hint of what's to come. Very enjoyable and sensual read. One of his best!

great as always:) love your stuff!!!

you have done it again, love the flow of the story, the anticipation and of course the climax

AGAIN YOU WROTE A MARVELOUS STORY, I ENJOYED IT VERY MUCH, CONGRATULATIONS. GREETINGS FROM MEXICO

A beautiful story with a great ending. Keep 'em comin'!

Great story! Nice work. ^__^

I always love your stories. Great job.

what man calls his parents "mommy" and "daddy"? That's just stupid.

once again I couldn't stop reading.never seen the end coming

Didn't put it down. I am hoping they got married later. But then you didn't hint either way. Great thanks

I've been reading erotica for years... over the years I have criteria on what is a good story... for an erotic story to be good the story must be able to bridge the sex without hurting the story.... for a story to be great, the sex must be tantalizing, the story must be engrossing, to the point that at some point no matter how hot the sex it's the story that carries through.

Write a second part and focus on scenes as well

Absolutley amazing.... it wasnt even the sexual aspect that got to me either it was the portrayel of love... Beautiful story... I encourage you to keep writing because that was amazing!

Story too sexy to vote, everyone's reaching for the tissues!!!!!!!! AWESOME!

violence is a big turn-off, jim

Violence has nothing to do with love. You even had the son masturbating as she narrated her story of abuse and multiple rape. You are a good writer, but you really need to get your shit together.

Rape has nothing to do with sex. Rape is about control and hate. How can you write this crap? I finished the story 'cause I don't comment on what I don't read, but I had to give this the one star, 'I hated it' rating. You say you want votes, write something worth my (and other's) time. I've read the other recent comments, nobody likes this 'stuff'. You must be seriously disturbed if you indulge fantasies like this AND write them down thinking anyone could possibly be entertained by it. Get help and straighten up if you are going to submit your stories. Did you never think that someone who admires you might just try to do these things? The written word has power to sway minds and you have a responsibility to your readers. Wake up and get your head on straight.

Your negative comments suggest that in your fantasy worlds, everything is peaches and cream idyllic and evil does not exist, and that's where you live 24/7. Thats called denial.

RAPE is real. It is one of, if not THE ugliest and most EVIL facts of life and that is how is portrayed in this story. It is not glorified in any way here.

In this story, it serves to contrast the beauty of the long-submerged love between these two people.

Perhaps, if you had had the occasion to spend some "quality time" with a rape victim for whom you cared greatly or truly loved before knowing about their past experience, you'd have seen this story as I did.

But, then again, perhaps not.

Powerful emotion, but not a lot of hot sex.

are not erotic.

This story was a total turn off. One scene after another of physical abuse, beatings, and repeated, multiple rape.

I am sorry I read it.

It would have been better if that SERIAL RAPIST had been beaten to near death by one of his victim's protectors, err - brothers -- errr--LOVERS!

There is no Orange Beach, FL. Orange Beach is on the Gulf Coast of Alabama. Jus sayin'

Great tempo, excellent dialogue, terrific spelling and punctuation.

But Donny should have beat his father unconscious.

Donny should have killed him.

Excellent story great surprise ending

I guessed the secret early on but still enjoyed it. Great keep them coming

A sweet ending indeed. You're a fine writer and I encourage you to keep on writing your stories. Thank you. 5🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

I think Jacqui should have allowed him to get close enough then sliced off His, Angry Purple Knobbed Thick Hot Shaft and let him bleed out as she called the Police and report an intruder who attempted to rape her. Not that

I didn't like the ending you chose. No court hearings, police reports, or lies from "Dad"

So many other writers are so repetitive. Boring. Scouries. This story is out of the ballpark. Amazing creativity. Loved it all. Hmmm. What happened to Gail. There’s more parts to this story. 👍

As always a great story!

Great story!

Why is your stories end with the protestants falling in deep emotional love, having babies and living happily ever after? You need to let the assholes get their just deserts and let everyone else just get on with their lives.

Was a good story up until the end. Dirty Daddy needed to have something really bad happen to him, like the other comment which said he should have had his dick cut off. And then you had to go and screw it all up further with the babies and 'living happily after' bullshit. 3/5 . . . .

Great Story

Good story, But I found it disturbing how the MCs were aroused by and maturbated to her memories of being abused and raped. Grossed me out, really.

Some additional irrelevant comments after 2nd reading. The story was a little verbose - "Crikey" "Bum"? You must be Aussie in spite of the Florida references -