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by grumpyturtle

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Very well written

It was a good story but in the end when she wanted to cum you should of let the dad go in the ass hole that would of made to story hotter Finnish it off with a perfect three some.

live4thebjlive4thebjover 6 years ago
Spell Check!

Spell Check but you got me hard so you get ***

boatbummboatbummover 6 years ago
Loved It!

Now that we know Dad enjoys sloppy seconds, he needs to suck all that hot cum out of Mama's sloppy cunt to give her another joyful orgasm or two and make his cuck fantasies complete! Just imagine what the Viagra will do for him now! ;-)

Proofreading oopsies aside, a 5* vote from me. Thanks!

Ducky7Ducky7over 6 years ago
isn't science wonderful

Such a happy fucking family....

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57over 6 years ago

I loved it. That pushed so many of my buttons : mom/son, mom/son/dad threesome, cuckholding! You should continue the storyline and have them dp her.

Just a suggestion but get an editor or a proofreader. You called Sarah "Linda" on page two.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
who the fuck is Linda?

man great story until you brought up Linda, the son's name for his penis.

prop69prop69over 6 years ago
Wxcellent story

best Mom, Dad, and Son story

How about another chapter

auberge1auberge1over 6 years ago
Wonderful

Wonderful! Hope there’s a second chapter in the works.

But... you definitely need an editor... Like who the hell is Linda?

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Psychobabalists

Probably the most 'phony' story ever written. It takes unrealistic to a new level. The language, scene setting and story line completely ridiculous. The essence of a good story is believability. Probably written by a psychology student/qualified psychologist. Sorry to be critical of someone's efforts but psychologists really should not try to anything as intellectuality challenging as writing as writing a story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
anonymous re: who the fuck is Linda?

I walked into the bedroom to find my parents sitting hand in hand on the bed. I smiled at them, and received a pair of grins in return. "Bob and Linda, are you ready?"

They both quickly nodded.

PaksdmPaksdmabout 6 years ago
Anonymous 01/29/18 Psychobabalists

hmm... let he who is without sin cast the first stone...

Sorry to be critical of someone's efforts but psychologists really should not try to anything as intellectuality challenging as writing as writing a story.

Please note the double "as writing".

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Make me fuck you

I love this story. A person earlier commented that this story is fake. Well for me that's how I got to fuck my mom. Dad has a hard time staying hard,but has no problem when watching me suck moms big tits,and fuck the shit out of her. Then he can get and maintain a hard on long enough to fuck mom for 7 minutes bringing her and him to a full blown orgasam

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Next chapter

HopE you continue next chapter. Prove read

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Loved almost all of it!

Not a fan of the physical violence, though, although it was consensual. Otherwise, great story. There were a few typos ("Linda"?) but not enough to bother me.

ryeandgingerayle2@yahoo.ca

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago
I stopped reading

The cuck garbage has now invaded the incest genre. God preserve us from the half men losers. Zero stars.

ManningDP69ManningDP69about 2 years ago

Daddy should really have to clean up your mess

greasedsilvergreasedsilveralmost 2 years ago

Fuck all the critics, I loved it, bloopers or not!

mrdata9770mrdata9770over 1 year ago

(11/5/2022) Weeellll.., cuck stories are not my cuppa tea, but this was kind of fun reading. Thank you for not having daddy clean her out. Was this story supposed to be real? Did I miss something?

ukrainianukrainian11 months ago

Fantastic story. Not usually in to check but you had it perfect. More please.

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