by grumpyturtle
It was a good story but in the end when she wanted to cum you should of let the dad go in the ass hole that would of made to story hotter Finnish it off with a perfect three some.
Now that we know Dad enjoys sloppy seconds, he needs to suck all that hot cum out of Mama's sloppy cunt to give her another joyful orgasm or two and make his cuck fantasies complete! Just imagine what the Viagra will do for him now! ;-)
Proofreading oopsies aside, a 5* vote from me. Thanks!
I loved it. That pushed so many of my buttons : mom/son, mom/son/dad threesome, cuckholding! You should continue the storyline and have them dp her.
Just a suggestion but get an editor or a proofreader. You called Sarah "Linda" on page two.
man great story until you brought up Linda, the son's name for his penis.
Wonderful! Hope there’s a second chapter in the works.
But... you definitely need an editor... Like who the hell is Linda?
Probably the most 'phony' story ever written. It takes unrealistic to a new level. The language, scene setting and story line completely ridiculous. The essence of a good story is believability. Probably written by a psychology student/qualified psychologist. Sorry to be critical of someone's efforts but psychologists really should not try to anything as intellectuality challenging as writing as writing a story.
I walked into the bedroom to find my parents sitting hand in hand on the bed. I smiled at them, and received a pair of grins in return. "Bob and Linda, are you ready?"
They both quickly nodded.
hmm... let he who is without sin cast the first stone...
Sorry to be critical of someone's efforts but psychologists really should not try to anything as intellectuality challenging as writing as writing a story.
Please note the double "as writing".
I love this story. A person earlier commented that this story is fake. Well for me that's how I got to fuck my mom. Dad has a hard time staying hard,but has no problem when watching me suck moms big tits,and fuck the shit out of her. Then he can get and maintain a hard on long enough to fuck mom for 7 minutes bringing her and him to a full blown orgasam
Not a fan of the physical violence, though, although it was consensual. Otherwise, great story. There were a few typos ("Linda"?) but not enough to bother me.
ryeandgingerayle2@yahoo.ca
The cuck garbage has now invaded the incest genre. God preserve us from the half men losers. Zero stars.
(11/5/2022) Weeellll.., cuck stories are not my cuppa tea, but this was kind of fun reading. Thank you for not having daddy clean her out. Was this story supposed to be real? Did I miss something?