All Comments on 'Family Tent Swap'

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tenbears43tenbears43over 13 years ago
Camping?

I love the way mom and dad get what they want. I do hope we see some more of this family and their camping trips. Like mother like daughter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
abusive asshole of a father

even then they make him a stud.i guess they like assholes.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 13 years ago
I wonder if Robert is man enough to take care of his mom

It sounds like she is a very needy woman and will fuck the young stud until he's so weak he won't be able to walk.

Good story, thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
camping switch !

awesome , very erotic , got me so hard reading it. a fantasy of my own , love to read more like this.

chargergirlchargergirlover 13 years ago
Great story!

Another fine addition to your story list!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
great story!

The only thing it could have had to improve would have been for Robert to plow his mom in the ass to make up for her pussy being loose from his dad's huge cock.

Overall an excellent story!

kaidmankaidmanabout 12 years ago
great job

I wish you would make part two maybe something that has Robert getting his sister again

MattAkerMattAkerabout 12 years ago

First page was better with sister/brother. That was what made me read thi story, ciao.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
The Best of both worlds

I think this would help alot on people save their marriages if sharing was accepted by everyone.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
im scared

You make me actually want to try this

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
The best story ever!

Oh god sethp! This is the best story ever! I can't wait to go camping again!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Great story

I love this story! Please make another one similar to this

nixongnixongalmost 10 years ago
do continue

I totally agree with anonymous. you stopped too early . more, many more chapters needed

cubbies4vrscubbies4vrsover 9 years ago
Damn!! good story

Definitely worth adding more chapters to show the new changes again really. good gave a good hard-on that I had to take care of..

blaster666blaster666over 9 years ago
I like camping!

Enjoyable read. Too bad none of my camping trips were this good. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
pregnat

son get mum impregnated and dad get daughter knocked up ok

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great story

Could us more chapters to explain the changes and arouse me agian

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great family story love the idea and the sex

gave you a 5 to say fuck you dear annnony

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Whore is the love.

No love Just rape and assholes for parents.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
no, this great story shows true family love

A family is always a hotbed of simmering sexual desires, conscious or unconscious. A father admires how his baby girl's developed into a voluptuous young female, and dreams about the cute little coochie she's got between her thighs. A daughter gets wet "down there" as she steals looks at the fat bulge under her daddy's fly. As brother and sister grow up together, they're fascinated by their bodily differences. His sister's sweet slit is the first pussy the boy ever sees, and her brother's chubby penis hanging down over his balls is the first male package the girl ever lays her eyes on. A boy finds himself admiring his mother's bountiful breasts and perky ass and gets hard thinking about what mom's hiding between her legs, the mysterious hairy hole he came out of. A mother loves how her son's grown up to be such a good-looking strapping young male, and keeps darting glances at what her kid's got jumping around in his pants. All these deep sexual urges are fueled by the unique love that exists within a family. When Tammy and Robert and their parents let their natural urges come out, they experience the greatest joy of their lives. It's all about family. Family cocks going up family cunts, and creamy semen from family balls shooting up convulsing family twats. Beautiful, just beautiful.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Loved it

Nice pacing and good sex. Kept me enthralled (hard).

PrinzmettlePrinzmettlealmost 7 years ago
BTW

It's "barely" not "barley". Spellcheck doesn't catch it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
MORE

Add more chapters.... like what happened the next morning till they came back home.

Public fucking or threesome or foursome would be so good too.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Mostly a really good story

This was a pretty good story for the most part. It was a somewhat believable premise and none of the characters were too weird to the point of being unbelievable. There is one problem with this story and it is pretty much just one sentence which is probably the worst piece of writing I have ever seen. “He was an asshole, but with a cock that big, you could afford to be.”. That is probably the stupidest sentence I have ever read in any story on this site and in any literature I have ever read. Having a big dick doesn’t mean you can be an asshole to women or anyone for that matter and no woman would ever think or say anything like that. If that is your view of women, that they will take abuse from a guy because of a big penis, then you have a very low view on women as a whole. That sentence is only something a huge piece of shit would actually believe.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
More please

I enjoyed your story. It was a big tits, big dick story. But you didn't get lost in the size part. Time it was told like was. All four people were who they were. A chapter two would be nice. All four living in the same house and learning the pleasures of complete family love.

HooHaa77HooHaa77over 2 years ago

I feel this is another story of yours that could benefit from being much longer. Developing the characters and situiation would benefit the story greatly.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago
1 star DUMPED with d/d

I absolutely HATE d/d u/n gf/gd ALL get dumped with a 1 star!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Wife and I both came reading and playing. I would love to suck him to

olblueyesolblueyes9 months ago

not a good quality tale,,just a stroke story,,parents are volatile,,seen too much of that,,! a loving sensuality would have made me more receptive,,,daddy is an asshole but has a big cock so that makes it all ok! BS!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

It would be cool if they both got pregnant with fraternal twins, both guys the father.

PhoenixLore1981PhoenixLore19816 days ago

You wrote this like you do most of your stories at the ones I have read which is like most writers on here by making it sound like size matters which is 100 percent bullshit any woman who has any brains and that's real knows that size don't matter it depends upon how you use it, The farther in this story needs his ass kicked and his balls cut off for he damn sure isn't a man and before you or anyone else says anything just cause he has a dick and balls don't make him a man no man is going to disrespect any woman much less his wife the daughter is Nothing but a lying 2 bit slut she first fucked her brother told all these things and then just like that she says fuck her brother he's Nothing compared to her no man father which says the daughter isn't a woman she's just some little drama queen and a lying backstabbing bitch just cause she thinks her dad is a God she's willing to ignore everything that was point blank clear and side with her dad when a actual woman wouldn't have been able to ignore that shit

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