All Comments on 'Family Vacation Plus 1 - Week 02'

Loved the first installment, second one seemed rushed, but good nonetheless. The vacation is not over until they arrive home!

Keep going.pbf

What a fantastic story. Very hot!

And this woman still never told her husband. Sad really.

Somehow this has to continue!!!!!

I loved this series I wish it didnt have to end it was so erotic braco

I loved this series I wish it didnt have to end it was so erotic bravo

Would love to learn what happens when they return home

Not enough hot teen fucking between Michael and Stacy.

Not enough hot teen fucking between Mike and Stacy

hot stuff.. more, more more.

Very cool, original story, and very hot. One of the best stories I have read here.

OMGG!!

Very well written!! You are very good at the build and the descriptions without being verbose.

Why has it taken you so long to submit these two stories? You are a talented writer and should continue this story with what happens between all of them when they get home.

Hot as fuck!

Story flowed very well and was extremely hot. Well done.

5 fucking stars all the way.

congratulations, a great story! sexy and hot! Hopefully there is a continuation! I would have liked to read Stacy giving Tom a blowjob or the two exchanged couples fucking in the same room.

Well done, an incest story which stands well above those normally found in this category. I don’t know why I started reading, because I mostly avoid incest as it’s often creepy and gets mixed up with impregnation. Here, with the slight exception of keeping her husband in the dark about her sex with the son, you have a good balance. Thanks, and try the reading aloud trick to sort your commas - though they’re already better in this chapter.

So fucking hot! Five stars and a favorite point!

Been a absolutely pleasure to read shame it had to end very impressive and erotic story 5star plus rating

Nicely written. Would be even hotter if scenes were bit more explicit. Especially the scene when Tom penetrated Stacy.

I hope we get part 3. Maybe some reluctant anal?

Thanks for a well written story with good character development and imagination!

That was the end? You need another chapter or two.

I guess I can see how some would say that is an amazing vacation and only in a fantasy would the son be ok with his girlfriend fucking his dad even if he was getting some from his mom a kid that young and naive would be jealous and wondering if his girlfriend who is also young and naive will still have anything to do with him now that she's been fucked by someone who is more experienced in sex and no 1 who actually knows what there doing or talking about can disagree with me on that matter it just wasn't realistic enough for me and the ending was abrupt

enjoyed this family sex tale,,lolol,, its not "hearable" its "audible"!! no such word as hearable........ the phrase "i knew my husband wasnt into her, he was just enjoying her company" is laughable,, of course he is into her!! she is grinding her butt into his cock,, anyway, i saved your story as a fav..

Great story, Next vacation the other parents joined the trip.

ok good line

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Not gonna lie but all of them sound horrible in the story. The most horrible are probably Stacy and Tom. They don't know that Mike had Sex with his mom and they still happily cucked him.

Great story. Maybe you can do another one... Week 3.

Nice concept but the writing was very amateurish - Sex wise you sure took the long way around the barn. I was beginning to think they wouldn't get 'er done before the prose ran out - The actual sex narative was way too spartan and totally lacking in detail - Also, your continued and excessive use of "as well" in lieu of "too" or "also" got to be very annoying . . . .