All Comments on 'Fascination! Ch. 05'

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tadams587tadams587almost 4 years ago
Great Read

I Love the lastest chapters. Richard has a new trick, lol. Though, I look forward to reading more of chapters with other women joining in to get a taste, like deb & her daughter did. Or a certain thick thighed, former step mother & step sister getting a lil more intimate with their new help. perhaps a broken air conditioner will have them undressed a layer or more. maybe richards boss has renovations going on & he ends up staying home with the constant allure.

tadams587tadams587almost 4 years ago
Loved the autofellatio story, also Richard's messy loads.

I love your new chapter. I was afraid "watched self-masterbation" was going to be the only action in the new series, but then you threw a hands free ejaculation & autofellatio. So far he received BJ from Krendall, her daughter, & himself. Keep it up. I loved the stories of Madison, poolside, having lips on his shaft, & Krendall caressing, licking, sucking his nuts.

Would be great if Richard stumbled into any of the leading females as they are in a more in a undressed state, even if by accident. I loved how this story fist started, Richard running into his fully nude Step Mom, the image of the busty woman covering herself, just in the nick of time. An image that will stay with him.

I also loved Richard's first full night of cfnm. When he licked & sucked his step mom's & step sister's toes (Ch3), & the accompanying description of Carrie's bottom moving in her seat, as if she was imagining herself riding a thick one (Ch3), was one of the Best. I really can't choose a favorite between that, the time Janet jerked her Step Brother off & purposely pointed his cumshot at her mother (Ch2), the times Janet pointed Richard's own cumshot twords himself (Ch3&4), or the various group activities of Richard's & his friends. I absolutely loved their group talk of having a crush on Carrie's & Janet's Body, also Barney's childhood desire to switch places with Richard & be spanked be Carrie (Ch3).

Keep up the Great work.

tadams587tadams587almost 4 years ago
I love them milfs, but more intimate times with Janet & Madison.

How about the young adult Janet take the lead next?

tadams587tadams587almost 4 years ago
More of Richard's lust for the thick women close to him, please.

More of Richard's lust for the women closest to him, please. The new stories are great, but they lean so much on Richards fantasy of being submissive. The next story would be longer to include more of Richard's lust for the women's bodies that are closest to him. Or some scenario(s) that may rekindled the tension. The opening when he walked in on his nude step mom covering herself in the nick of time, was great. Maybe not include full-frontal enf, thou I wouldn't mind. Perhaps him encountering them in bikinis, lingerie, sunbathing, a too-small towel/hand towel should add more length. I loved it when he couldn't help but get list in a fantasy when Carrie & Janet showed off their new swimsuits. He had them covered in cum, before they made it to the pool.

I also loved the stories where Janet admired her step brother's ass or aimed his high volume orgasms where ever she pleases; over the Pool, at her Mom, and at Richard himself. Who else will she get to point that fat dick at? The former step sister should also show off some sexier clothes, now that she is a full adult. Maybe a leaotard, croptop & panties to bed when its hot.

Also, maybe a pent up Richard takes fertility pills or Viagra for most a week, thinking they are caffeine pills. Maybe his nuts become the size of baseballs & a shade of blue.

Or Richard gets his testicles bit by a snake & someone has to suck out the poison.

Carrie fantasized riding her step sons thick Cock when he sucked her feet was also great. Or the times Richard couldn't help but be mesmerized by Carrie or Janet's Thigh's. Breasts, ass, etc.

tadams587tadams587over 3 years ago
Looking forward to the next chapter!

Looking forward to the next chapter of Richard blowing his load due to being over stimulated by the thickness of Carrie & Janet. Need more material in the latest chapters of Richard being stimulated by the women themselves & not just the idea of being submissive. Also, a story of an injured Barney getting a sponge bath. Perhaps a story with Janet seeing her former step-dad, neil in the buff would be great. Or perhaps Richard came across Candace, his mom at a nudist camp .

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Would love to see more

I’ve been waiting a long time for an update and I would really love to see more. I would also like to read about Richard having Wet Dreams and the ladies in his life watching him dose himself in his sleep.

tadams587tadams587over 3 years ago
Great Series., gotta see some more insatiable behavior till the end

The reboot is great though would love to read more of Carrie and Janet lusting after that thick dick. Loved in the prequal when Richard sucked his moms feet & she moved around like she was riding him till she came. Gotta have the milf And her daughter be get a little on edge with their cravings, but push their beloved Richard in the deep end. Looking forward to reading on Janet's party, & events leading up to it. Perhaps Barney get a helping hand on his recovery, or Richard's father neil to make a visit to the themed event. I enjoy readind Richard getting either dosed or a taste of his own medicine, but I would also love it when his massive loads dose, everything. Don't end the series until all his friends, and I mean everyone, gets covered.

tadams587tadams587over 3 years ago
I'm dreaming of a white Christmas.

Give us an encore, with another chapter of Richard's massive loads.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Great story! Love more feet play, the girls feeding Richard his load off their toes.

Getting the boys to compare, measure and take pics.

A smaller guy who the women tease in a fun and sweet way!

Great work!

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