All Comments on 'Fate'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

its a very emotional and nice story and really touching , i felt happy that at last they found what they deserve its really fate

lonesomedove66lonesomedove66over 11 years ago
Loved it

After such a sad start it was beautiful to read and Fate really can be kind after such a tragedy hit them both

TimothyMTimothyMover 11 years ago

In spite of the title you managed to keep the meant-for-each-other-and-fated-to be-together subtle enough to make this story really enjoyable and hot, even with the sad bits. And I applaud the fact that you let two years pass before they met, so that Mikal found his way back to the personality that Henry would like.

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