All Comments on 'Fated Ch. 24'

WF~

Again you have taken these two to another level as they explore what life has in store for them. I love how you take us from hot sex, to real life issues and everywhere in between. As always, you leave me waiting for more.

Beautiful story! The words the sister told the brother brought tears to my eyes. Keep on writing

I'm amazed she's not pregnant yet.

... So touching ....

keep it up. 5 stars.

I think it needs more dialogue. Badly.