All Comments on 'Father Time Pt. 06'

This was a good story. I can understand the rationale for the ending but for me it was a downer. Keep writing.

Wow what a way to totally end on a shit note. Hated the ending but gave 4 stars just for the effort. Guess Molly just wanted dick and Scott wanted pussy and kids was a kink.

'Nuff said.

Great story. Constructive note. You changed their last name in the middle of the story from Gilman to Gilbert. You should fix that if you can.

I hated the ending, up until then, I enjoyed it.

Such a nice building but a rushed ending - it’s almost as if you got bored of the writing - could have finished on a high with her actually getting bred and heavy with her dad’s seed and marrying him etc.

I know it’s been seven years but you should have kept writing like made mom in the dream tell her that she pregnant and that she okay with her daughter and husband being happy and that she would be watching over her grandchildren .