by SolarRay
Wow, well written, complete with accurate research; very impressive. I noticed a couple of small typos, and I found myself wishing it was longer.
I listed this story amongst my favourites and scored it a "five". I feel that you could probably sell this as an e-book. I'm imagining it with more of the friendship with Kyra, a longer ending, their coupling and tripling in the office later, and with a, "they lived happy ever after" kind of ending. I would buy that.
Well done!
A great big thanks to all of you who have voted and commented or sent me messages directly. I really appreciate all the thoughtful feedback, as always, and glad you all enjoyed this story so much!
Rich in imagery, erudite, wonderfully sensual, erotic and warm...Thanks!
Like you say in your bio, this is all about being sex positive. And so much fun to have so much sex, all the hotter for the watching and the anticipation. I love the way you excel at piling on the heat and taking your characters deeper and deeper into erotic and loving sex.
I just re-read this story, and I still got a thrill. You really pile on the heat and it is so easy to get caught up in this wonderful world where everything is about sex!