by regularguy13
Any story that turns a character like Summer into a cum swallower, that fucks in front of her friends deserves 5 stars. LOL
A story where a woman listens to a man and changes her mind? Sounds like a Fantasy to me!
Good job!
What's Valentine's got to do with it? I've never read any feminist literature (and I've read a lot of the stuff!) that argues blowjobs are demeaning. The story failed to address the patriarchal systems that still exist, especially in this context where the story was about men controlling women by making them do things they weren't necessarily comfortable with in the name of 'feminism.' The fundamental tenet of feminism is choice- choice does not come from shaming people.
Sooorrry but this is definitely way too far from hitting the spot.
There are some concepts about feminism in there, but really clumsily laid down. The feeling I got somehow was a copy/paste from a website or memo about feminism.
And I can't shake the feeling you're just thrashing these concepts (that are here, it's a start) with the overall story of "idiot feminist gets to suck dick, men get to see boobs".
I'm not saying this is easy to do. An option would be that if you want to write feminist, erotic littérature, you should probably ask a feminist what she (or he) thinks about it before publishing.
A bit over the top, but fun and funny. Using feminist ideology against Summer was brilliant! How can any guy be against the "Free the Nipple!" movement.