All Comments on 'Festival Transformation'

This was fun to read!

Love the story need more of sissy Dani!💕

We love a good bi awakening here! I love that Eliza and Dani are such bad bitches now... I'm a little jealous of Dani tbh, I would love to be in this situation. If you can I would love to see more! And of course many hugs and kisses from a closeted femboy :3

You have to keep writing this story honey I can't wait to read more x sissy Lucy

Yeah, keep going, just work on maybe finding an editor. The misspelled words are annoying. The storyline is good though.

Wow what a sexy progression!! I am loving Dani and dom-Eliza. So hot 🔥

Keep on writing. Love the fluid sexuality, no need to make it nasty - keep it fun and hot and wet - just like this. xoxo, Di

fantastic story love to read more about dani

That was fun! I hope you write more stores about Dani.

Yes!! Please write more of Dani. I just changed from Terry Lee C........ to TeriLeigh Cravsitt at 63. I, too love BBC . Would get the "Queen of Spades" tat but I love cock and don't want to limit myself. Lol.

This was so hot!!!

Omg this was like oddly wholesome and so sexy!

I'm glad you are back. If you wanted to do a part 2 can it involve Dani taking up Anthony on his offer?

I loved this so much! Sex doesn’t need to be sordid or judgemental. It just needs to be fun. xo

You definitely need to do more let Dani explore who he is to both sex's

Sex should be fun you can be a total bottom, but they are complete top too girls

Great story. I would love to find a girlfriend like Elizabeth who would transform me

OMG!!!! So fucking amazing!!! This is your best one yet! I love this soooooo much :)))))))

Loved it! Bring on more of the same.

Loved the story this was sooo 🥵!!!!!!

What a fabulous story and a must read. Great writing, characters and premise. A story of love and discovery without degradation and humiliation…so fresh and wonderful. We NEED more chapters as I want to see where Elizabeth and Dani go from here and what adventures lie ahead in their future. Please keep writing this story!

This is so fucking good and so fucking hot. I thought I was just going to edge myself but by the time I got to the end I couldn’t hold it in and just let it go. Keep writing, this is amazing