All Comments on 'Fifth Wheel'

NO ONE WANTS A NOVEL

I love the good long stories, don't let anyone tell you anything else.

Very enjoyable. Light on the sex, comparatively, but quite entertaining. I loved the Lovecraftian touches.

But it was a great story

interesting story, well done

Anyone who doesn't want to read a lengthy story should stop when they get to the bottom of page 1 and see there are several pages. Love this story, little stilted at first but great development - keep at it! (Hoping there is more PTW in the works too...) 5*

Shut up. Or 'man up' and sign in with a name.

Some of us DO want a novel. or at least as long as it takes.

Fucking whiner. It is FREE, you knucklehead, if you don't like it, read something else.

Deep

@anon, does putting a falsehood in all caps make it any less a falsehood? Just because you want a short, stroke story, does not mean others don't appreciate a well-developed story.

That was a fucking weird story

is there more of this story?

Definitely the beginning of a much longer tale. You have me hooked and hopefully there will be subsequent stories. Thanks for the great writing.

Weird. I don’t read stories like this usually….but wow! Any more to come?

Enjoyed it very much, the "Scavenger" hunt was a little obscure, but all in all a fun story.

what an amazing story. thank you, loved it immensely...

Great read! Thanks for sharing your imagination with the rest of us!

Brilliant! Loved every word.

My misspent youth was D&D, Call of Cuthulu, amd Chill ...spiced with Poltergeist the Legacy & a host of movies. This rang some bells for me, and is easily my new favorite 'love story'.

Not my usual fare at a!l. But what a tale. A tale from the realms of Poe. First class.

@AZslyder, you don't even have to read to the bottom of Page one, the number of words is right in the Story Info.

Usually only read short stories, but glad to read this long one. Very pleasant read, well written.

Dope story, LB. Thank you so much for writing it. More, please. Randi.

I have a companion piece to this that I am currently working on. Thank you all for you kind words of encouragement. Take care and I will work hard to knock out this next story.

LB

Creative, interesting, weird, but confusing and hard to follow the way it switched scenarios willy nilly multiple times.

will you be continuing legacy and go to guy???

Hauntingly good story! Thanks for sharing it with us.

That! Was a truly well written story! Very much appreciated. I’d love to read more, but it is so good on its own, I’m afraid that any sequel would not be as good.

Excellent story! Very well done! It is less a sex story and much more of a story with sex as a central plot device. The temporal amd setting jumps are a bit confusing unless you are reading closely. Excellent imagination and detail work!

Sorry, I must be the odd one out here, I found it hard to follow and quite confusing at times. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

What an incredible read! Had me eagerly anticipating whatever would happen next. Truly enjoyable.