All Comments on 'Fifth Wheel'

by Ann Douglas

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Chapter 2?

Will you be continuing this great start?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
another douglas great

made me remember my first time!

tazz317tazz317about 6 years ago
SPRING BREAK AND A DISCOVERY

a 5th wheel is adjustable and flexible in a schedule, TK U MLJ LV NV

SWT3SWT3about 6 years ago
Thank you

What a wonderful, sweet story! It flows well and captures the respective moods of these two lovers. I am sitting here thinking Harold will have a wonderful reunion with June next year. I am not quite sure why you put this in the 70's, but it was done really well and generated a certain nostalgia for that period.

I am pleased to say I am officially one of your groupies and look forward to reading more of your stories.

jsmangisjsmangisabout 6 years ago
Another Winner!

Your stories are always the best ones on this site, and this was no exception.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
As Always

Ann, I read everything you write and I am never disappointed! You are amazing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Believable

My first was a woman renting with her friend and son. I was not really interested but coerced her into taking me to her room for sex. I lived next door and only saw her one more time, socially. It ended poorly and I learned how to be less aggressive and more reserved.

freight03freight03about 6 years ago
Mature

As always another well written story! I enjoy your mature stories the most....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
You Did It Again!

When I saw your name as the author, I stopped skimming the index, and was rewarded as expected with a well written story.

tallmtredtallmtredabout 6 years ago
You keep getting better.

Ann, each story touches me in a nww way . Thank you for sharing your thoughts and hard work with us.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Another great story.

Ann, Your stories always draw me in & hold my interest. You are an amazing & gifted writer. I’m a 68 year old man & always have a bulge after I’ve read your stories!! Thanks

rightbankrightbankabout 6 years ago
I was hoping

his night with June would embolden him to drive home via the launch site.

Great coming of age Story

Thanks

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TomorrowTodayTomorrowTodayabout 6 years ago
Fuck me, Ann, this was great even by your standard

I can't remember the last time I slowed down so much to luxuriate in the tale. This brought back fine memories and feverish ruminations.

chytownchytownalmost 5 years ago
WOW A Trip Down Memory Lane*****

Thanks for sharing.

Gary20201Gary20201about 4 years ago
My oh My

You have a fantastic way with words, you are my favorite author bar none, you don't rush the stories and you go slow with the action. It brings back memories of my youth, very well written as all of your stories are, I am trying to read all your stories and I have read 6 or 8 so far. Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

After reading several of your stories set in the early to mid 1970s I have to think that you were there with me, coming of age in a time of prog rock, Watergate, and newly legal abortion. It was an exhilarating and terrifying time to be young and you capture it perfectly. I would never want to live there again, but I’m quite happy to journey there with you for a visit. Thank you.

AdenzenoAdenzenoalmost 3 years ago

I was pretty much Harold, just 8 years later..😁

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

You are a most talented author Ann. This was another of your stories which I loved. Thank you.

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